by shaunreagh
I wish I could meet a bridge couple like the Stauntons
Tricia
Great, nicely-told.
How about a sequel describing the next game? Maybe the two ladies could feature this time?
Been reading stuff on this site for years, and this one has become my favorite of all time. I'll be watching eagerly for more from the author!
You write absolutely beautifully. I loved the build up, the increasing tension, the frantic competing urges. I wondered what Brian was up to with the other partner ... maybe she was stroking him under the table. But wondering about it made the story even hotter. Still shivering here ...
perhaps the reason her husband wasn't doing very well is that the boss's wife had her hand in HIS pants! That would give another good story which could be followed by the boss taking her anally for a third story. Great writing. Keep going!
Wow, that was amazing... I also kept on waiting for the other shoe to drop - that is, to find out that the boss's wife had been jerking off Brian the whole time - but, I think that actually, the story was better without it. That would have made the story too cliche, I think... It's perfect the way it is.
You're a wonderful writer. Seriously. But I suspect you already know that. I further suspect that you make your living at it. If not, you should.
Just revisited this story recently, Shaun and I still think it's your best. Feel free to keep writing to try to do better than this one. :)
Your stories are written in a tone and style that no one else can seem to incorporate into their writings quite as well. I will read this story many more times in the near future!
Very very stimulating ..... certainly was an "arousing" story !!!
In future expansion of this theme...it would be great were Mrs. Staunton eventually to seduce Brian. The four of them, then, can have great times with each other...together or separately.
I tried writing erotic fiction too - but in Hebrew. Once a mostly soft sensual swinging story managed to help me entice my wife... and then we fulfilled some version of it. But since we are the bonding kind of people, and our first couple was SO fine... it took a spin towards some kind of polyamory. It's been a few years now. And real life can be so different in so many ways than the fantasy!
I loved this story.
The kitchen scene where Mr Staunton fucks his employee's wife is PRICELESS!
The WIFE is a KEEPER!
The fact that she was producing enough pussy juice to be slippery should have smelled to high heaven. The participants can't usually smell it because of their high sexual arousal. However, the other people in the room should have smelled it from such lose proximity.
I am copy pasting above anons comment:
I loved this story.
The kitchen scene where Mr Staunton fucks his employee's wife is PRICELESS!
The WIFE is a KEEPER!
I would really like to see a sequel where Mrs. Staunton comes over to play bridge with her girlfriends!
Admittedly, I am a sucker for boss-fucks-wife stories. I am a TOTAL SUCKER for stories where the boss fucks his EMPLOYEE'S WIFE.
Brian's wife is a keeper.
Excerpt from the story:
"He has pulled the tiny spaghetti straps of my dress down my arms, exposing my breasts, and the breasts want his hair rough against them. Where did I get such an urge! The soft tender flesh of my breasts and the hard firm nubs of my nipples crush themselves into the hard wiry carpet of hair that covers the huge man's chest. (As I knew it would!) He drives in deep and hard. I gasp and cry out and my thighs crush hard as my breast pancake into his chest."
★★★★★+ (5.5 = 110%, exceeds expectations!)
Excerpt from the story (SPOILER ALERT!):
"He has pulled the tiny spaghetti straps of my dress down my arms, exposing my breasts, and the breasts want his hair rough against them. Where did I get such an urge! The soft tender flesh of my breasts and the hard firm nubs of my nipples crush themselves into the hard wiry carpet of hair that covers the huge man's chest. (As I knew it would!) He drives in deep and hard. I gasp and cry out and my thighs crush hard as my breast pancake into his chest."
★★★★★+ (5+)!
EXCERPT FROM THE STORY:
Quote:
His hand is at my butt, cupping a buttock, lifting me high. My arms are round his neck. My legs coil out and round him too, ankles closing tight around his buttocks as his hand on my butt lifts my dress, finds nakedness and moisture underneath. He whispers into my ear, 'I'm going to fuck you now, sweet thing' ...
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KINKY! Love it. Gave you; ❤💚❤💚❤+ (5.5 = 110%, 'exceeds expectations')!
While I read the kitchin scene, I imagined Mr. Staunton was fucking my ex-wife. Her fetish were powerful men who presume women are his for the taking.
Irresistibly erotic. Kinky. Entertaining.
Gave it a 5.0 = 100%!
Excerpt from this story:
"His hand is at my butt, cupping a buttock, lifting me high. My arms are round his neck. My legs coil out and round him too, ankles closing tight around his buttocks as his hand on my butt lifts my dress, finds nakedness and moisture underneath. He whispers into my ear, 'I am going to fuck you now, sweet thing,' as his hands burrow under my pussy -- exposed, open, gaping, slick with juices -- and with a sleight of hand that I can't quite fathom his prick, hard and long, is there..."
This is a must read story about a brazen boss who fucks his employee's wife.
Excerpt from the story:
Quote: My thoughts drift hopelessly: Brian, outside, learning how to p[l]ay bridge with Mrs Staunton while here in the kitchen her husband probes deep in her pupil's wife. I rock then roll atop him. He is bigger by far than Brian. Deeper and further inside me, than Brian has ever been. What will we do if Brian walks in? End quote.
I am copy pasting another users public comment:
"SweetLittleLiar - about 14 years ago
Mmmmm loved it
You write absolutely beautifully. I loved the build up, the increasing tension, the frantic competing urges. I wondered what Brian was up to with the other partner ... maybe she was stroking him under the table. But wondering about it made the story even hotter. Still shivering here ..."
The wife is a keeper. Full stop. End of story.
There are moments when a girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do. Brian's wife knows that, and by now she rocks then rolls atop Brian's boss. He is bigger by far than Brian and right now he is deeper and further inside her than Brian has ever been.
Five stars. 👍👍!
I'm copy pasting somebody else's comment:
"PaulBaron - almost 8 years ago
One of the best stories ever!
I tried writing erotic fiction too - but in Hebrew. Once a mostly soft sensual swinging story managed to help me entice my wife... and then we fulfilled some version of it. But since we are the bonding kind of people, and our first couple was SO fine... it took a spin towards some kind of polyamory. It's been a few years now. And real life can be so different in so many ways than the fantasy!"
Very very erotic. Th55e storyline was very imaginatively conceived. A remarkable story.
My kind of boss-fucks-wife story.
☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0).
Excerpt from Ch. 2 of the story.
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... I open my mouth to its widest extent, sucking his tongue down my throat, bucking as his shaft plunges deep. My fingers fumble with the buttons on his shirt. He has pulled the tiny spaghetti straps of my dress down my arms, exposing my breasts, and the breasts want his hair rough against them. Where did I get such an urge! The soft tender flesh of my breasts and the hard firm nubs of my nipples crush themselves into the hard wiry carpet of hair that covers the huge man's chest. (As I knew it would!) He drives in deep and hard. I gasp and cry out and my thighs crush hard as my breast pancake into his chest.
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I always read the comments after a story.
They are often insightful, funny, or erotic.
However, there has been a change over
the past year.
An anonymous contributor has taken to
copying sections of the story or comments
from years past and posting them.
He also likes to leave short statements followed
by a series of emoji’s.
This in it self wouldn’t be annoying, but he
then goes on to repeat the very same
contributions over and over. Preservation
of these offerings is not only annoying
but dilutes the usefulness and enjoyment
of the “comments” section.
I don’t understand why the site managers
haven’t addressed this issue. Hopefully it’s
not due to some erroneous interpretation
of freedom of speech.
Thanks, shr
Excellent: 5.0 = 100% (*****).
Very, very erotic, borderline kinky. Loved it!
The storyline was very intelligently conceived and masyerfully crafted.
Erotic-cum-kinky!
I gave you s 5.0 = 💯%!
Brian's wife is aware that she will do whatever it takes to help him get the job. In my book she is a keeper!
is a keeper.