All Comments on 'Brief Encounters'

Not bad.

Congratulations Ed!!!! Your second story that was actually decent. Still had the same bullshit theme only this time not carried out. You got a 3 for this one simply because you deserved it. Still good writing.

Your writing and creativity was so good that you left me hoping you will do a sequel focusing on the ex's as to their thinking during the relationship and now that they will both be divorced. Did they want that? Were they surprised or shocked? What did they want and how could two people want the same thing without coordinating? Were they having an affair, for example, and wanted to force the end of their marriages?

Great tale. Totally unique. Keep up the good stuff.

Five Stars

The Same but different. As one commentator mentioned it had the same theme as your other works but didn't have them carry it out and was a complete success.

5* Please spread your wings and continue to do some different plots!

It could have gone to several places and still be a great story. Where it did go was very different and totally works as an entertaining story. Much thanks for a great non-cuckolding story.

Thanks for this!

You can drop it into LW all you want, but this is a delighttul and clever little Romance, IMO.

Now they have to deal with the divorce trauma, as well as not get busted for violating the company morals rules. Will true love prevail? Stay tuned.... ;-)

Nice one, thanks!

nope, nope I won't read it or even think about it again

disjointed time skips suck - no matter who does them, they dont make you look clever, they dont add to the story

Enjoyed

Don't see anything here at all.

Ha, this was an interesting story, glad they actually communicated and found love : )

Good Story; fun.

As mentioned by others, couple of different ways this could have gone. One way would be for Val and Jolie to suggest their spouses meet up and make their desired video.

A sequel would be nice to deal with the fallout.

This author always leaves me hanging. I suppose I can always imagine an ending but I always feel this author ends their stories too soon. Very unsatisfying.

5*. Your stories are very original. Thank you for sharing.

Nope. Good writing, but this just two cheaters trying use their spouses to justify the beginning of their affair. If either was really concerned about saving their marriages, they would stop with the photos