by VictorBlum
Loved the pace, and the descriptions. Very nice details and nicely written.
Love to see more, where will this lead, what will he teach her? What will she teach him?
this is a really good story - just a few distracting things -
I thought you were a dancer!" Walter exclaimed. "You look like a dancer." And she did. She had strong firm logs leading up to reasonably wide hips
"logs" I think you meant to be legs.
Great pace, and I didn't get lost in the details. You did a nice job of blending his, and her, arousal and passion into the story.
The sex was definitely hot... I hope she wears him down to the nub!!
this is one of the best writen stories I've read to date. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the series now.