All Comments on 'Bring 'em Back Johnny'

What a story! Loved the characters and the premise of the story. You have done something that all writers strive to do, you keep the reader interested in the story. I couldn't stop reading. I had to read it to the end and keep guessing on where you were going to take this next. Thank you for the enjoyment and your imagination.

Would have been nice if you included her response though.

Wonderful story.

Really clever premise.

Extremely well developed characters.

Superb dialogue.

Almost believable.

Five stars from me.

One of the best stories I've read recently. I also would have liked Susan's answer. Thank you for this excellent story.

Complete story. This was great. Exellent characters. Room for more. Would like more of this. 10

Real Mills and Boon, but I really enjoyed the read. Just waiting for a frog to turn up to be kissed and turn into a prince. Still, a great read and the characters were real. Best of all there were no silly typing and punctuation errors which detract. Thank you. Marie.

More please

Much appreciated, 5*

You actually turned two common conventions totally on their head. Firstly, the damsel actually rescued the hero. Secondly, huge Male size was depicted as an affliction!!!!! Wonderful fun. Thank you very much.

Great story with a happy ending. It was a little long but not long enough; would loved to go a little further with their relationship, but it's still a good enough place to stop. I cracked up when Susan cold-cocked Vicky, I could just see it happening. Thanks for writing a great love story.

zerozerozero, quit on page one. Just too neurotic for me to get interested in... You do know, Alfred Hitchcock is dead and you ain't him....?

Very boring. I'm a fan of slow burns romances, but this story was not only lacking sex but also romance. There was virtually zero tension to their romance, which would be fine if what we did get was actually written out. The whole "she told me about her life then we kissed". So they basically become a couple in the span of a paragraph.

Also like half this story is him telling people from his former life about the accident. It just got so repetitive and boring. That's ultimately my biggest gripe, it was just a plane old boring story, and what intrigue was present at the beginning vanishes startlingly fast.

I read this a few years ago and was happy to read it again.