by moreandmore
WTF, I read the disclaimer and read on. My allergies kicked in so bad I had a hard time reading with my eyes watering so much. This is probably the saddest and happiest story I have read.
For being such a short story, it was complete, it had it all.
Thanks for sharing this story!
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If anybody gives this story less than a 5, they need their head examined. Thank you, for crafting a masterpiece. 5 stars.
I can't believe you crammed this much development and emotion into such a short work. There should be a way to give a story more than 5 stars!
How the hell did you create such strong emotions in such a short story??? The room has suddenly got very dusty.
Lying git. You said this story would tug on the heartstrings not shatter them completely and cast the shards to every compass point. Stunning story. Evocative. Brilliant. Emotional. Wonderful. A short story but one of the best I've ever read. BardnotBard
I have read this a half dozen times, and I still cry every time...fabulous story.
It is unusual for a comment section to have what seems to be ALL positive responses. A very good tale, just as you described - thank you. 5 stars (I agree with the comment that this may be your best)
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