All Comments on 'Brisket'

Brought back memories. My wife, Carol, was very good friends with her boss, Fred who is 19 years younger than she is. She was approaching 50 but still looked mid 30's. Blonde hair, blue eyes and a nice trim figure with full B boobs. One day I called her office and was told she had left for the day with Fred. Something didn't seem right so I drove over to Fred's house where her car was parked out front. I parked up the street and went around to the side of the house. When I looked through the window, I got the shock of my life. Carol was standing in the living room, naked, except for her nylon panties. I watched as she walked over to a completely naked Fred, dropped to her knees and started sucking his cock. I was surprised to find that I was rock hard watching her suck on his cock and balls and swallowing which she had never done for me. They went into his bedroom so I changed windows and watched her suck him til he was hard enough to fuck her. When she got home, I told her what I saw and told her that, if she wanted to stay married she had to tell me everything. She had been fucking him for about 2 years. They never fucked in the office although she had given him several blowjobs there. I made her tell me every guy she'd fucked since we'd been married. She had fucked one other guy for about three months and had given one man 3 or 4 blowjobs. She had gone to lunch a few times with her old boyfriend and always sucked his cock and spent one afternoon in a motel fucking. We are still married and I'm pretty sure she has stayed faithful. We've had great sex as she would tell me about the guys she fucked.

I've enjoyed this a few times but was curious about the title. Was that in reference to 'dead meat'? It would be nice to know if your still around, perhaps writing more - thanks for the tales.

somewhere east of Omaha

Alight does not mean to light a fire.

Sure does hurt Been there copped that Keep writing (jaybee186)

I wonder how many sex lives of middle aged couples are like that described by the MC?

Too over-the-top. And Rob passed the psycho test for becoming a policeman? I don't think so.

What is with the LW fetish for “I must burn everything!”

These stories are all the same. Wife cheats, husbands wants all the sordid details... wife cooks big breakfast 🤣 🤣 🤣

The fact there was no sex should have made him suspicious. And he’s a cop!

I enjoyed this tale. It’s a good thing I didn’t write, tho. I’d have had the MC drag lover boy back into the house and thrown him into the shower with the whore. A much shorter story. I guess that’s one reason I’m not a writer. DMW aka Sumnut

Another great learning experience missed. The reason why he didn't want to know the why was the same reason he got betrayed. He should check his daughters are actually his, just in case he's a real Bona fide cuck.

It was a good story, if a little tired, until the rushed end.

The rate of divorce for law enforcement professionals in the USA is by some estimates 75% as opposed to the national average of 50%. There are two seemingly good reasons for this (1) the job itself and (2) the kind of people that go into this profession. Plenty of gristle there to pad out the antagonists into real 3d characters.

But I can see that his lack of introspection will lead him towards a life of playing golf, maybe the occasional bit of boating and an equally but seemingly inexplicably boring sex life with his next partner.

Apoyo al anónimo...cómo diablos puede ser policía si lo han engañado toda la vida...? En mi país son corruptos, drogadictos, no respetan los derechos humanos., Cornudos, abusadores de poder.... Pero nunca sería. Actores porno!

Good story. Pretty sure legally she could get back into the home though. She has rights to the property no matter who's name is on the title. Other than that this is a good story so far

He should be fired from the Force for cause. His very own wife cheating on him since forever, and he never found out?!?! What a great Policeman!!! LOL

5 stars - I also do not care what the SLUT's reasons were.

She cheated - she got caught - she got kicked to the curb - end of story.

It amazes me how many stories have the husband come home right when the wife is cleaning up after her lover leaves. Worse, no one takes advantage of the situation. Just yank her feet and watch her break her neck. Go back out to your car, and leave. Come home at your regular time, and discover the body. Call it in, all upset. It’s ruled an accident, you keep all the assets, and don’t have to worry about the slut anymore!

ZK

Some of the comments are longer than the stories. Maybe you should stick to Female Agitprop. Can Literotica or the authors create these keywords?

Yet another nothing story.If the girls didn't believe him,why didn't he play them the tape he had of Joe.?

The problem I had with this story is we never got to hear Helen's reasoning to her years of cheating. Yes, I know Rob didn't care, but I, the reader wanted to know. At the very least it would help expand on her character.

And the ending was just too abrupt (seen that in several of Ohio's stories now) like the author was done with writing even though the story didn't have an actual end.

And finally as a BTB tale, taking the wedding rings, the photos and the vase away from her is just hollow and petty.

Abrupt ending, but there is ch.2

The thing is, WERE THE CHILDREN HIS? It is for things like this one needs to find out why she did it and for how long. If that can be established. Just to walk away may be a short term solution but it will hit you later on. Its no good compartmentalising things. Get the girls DNA tested first. In this case there is no trust now, just the verification process. Just to add insult to injury to this story, wifey may just well be catatonic, and as such she may need a visit to the local looney bin, oops, the psychiatric unit of the local hospital. Thus if he is waiting for the car to drive away he be in for a long wait and then he may be at fault for not looking after a person. In this storey it looks to me wifey is leading a double life. Jekyll and Hyde.

What a bunch of fucking morons most of you people are.

God damn...most of you have the IQ of a grapefruit and the emotional intelligence of a hamster.

This story. The author goes to great lengths explaining that he tried for years to get her to be more adventurous sexually with him. Even to the point of counseling. She refused. For 25 fucking years she was a cold fish during sex.

Then he finds out she is throwing it at other men? All kinds of kinks! And has been for at least 2 or 3 years. WTF?

Does it even matter why? Not to me as a man it doesn't. Relating to the MC..I have supported and loved you for 25 years. Had children with you. Raised them together. Sacrificed. Built a life. And now this betrayal? Yeah. Don't even care. Fuck right off. Take some shit and get out. Never come back. Don't try and explain it. In this case? He doesn't even need closure. I wouldn't want it. Stupid cunt.

And to the idiot below who's incensed at him for ruining Stephanie's life? Gee he didn't have to do that. What a mean man.

You can fuck right back off into your emotionally stunted life as well.

These people are CLOSE FRIENDS you stupid cow. Like they live and socialize in the same neighborhood and have for the better part of 2 decades. Stephanie is a friend. You think he would be doing her a favor by NOT telling her?

Wrap your mind around this too...it's all there very clearly IN the story, but sometimes you have to actually explain it so the slow kids get it.

He had a tape as evidence of Stephanie's husband admitting to the affair. Giving details. Proof that he can actually use to prove adultery in his divorce filing. He clearly talks about meeting his divorce attorney and sharing the tape with him as evidence of rhe affair. He is clearly going to file with adultery as the cause. Because with proof...sometimes it creates an advantage in a messy divorce. And frankly...with this bitch of a character's level of betrayal? He's obviously lost all respect and any feelings of caring for her. He has a very valuable pension and retirement as a cop. So...maybe adultery with proof? Maybe it means he gets to keep a bigger share of the assets and his retirement? I mean why the fuck would he be charitable I any way with this liar? Even when he confronted her in bed that he knew of her affair with Mark. And he gave her the chance to be truthful and try and explain then? She didn't. She continued to lie.

So with the tape as proof. Naming Joe the friend in the divorce action...how long until Stephanie finds out anyway?

And if I had a close friend who knew about my life long partner...knew my wife or girlfriend was stabbing me in the back? And didn't tell me? Yeah...second place on my "I hate you" list? Is my supposed friend who didn't warn me.

So...in summary...I don't know what world ya'll live in? But this story is a tragic one about how a spouse can utterly betray another spouse in the worst possible way. And then gets caught. And faces the unforgiving consequences. It's well told. Its believable (which in this genre seems to be more and more rare). Its well written. And for a cop as the MC? It's realistic in terms of the methodical way he collects evidence. Informs parties involved. And deals with the cheating spouse. And suppresses his rage.

Well done.

With reference derogatory comments below.

Why do her reasons matter? Whether he reason was just for fun, neurotic narcissism, enjoyment of elicit sexual thrill. Does not matter. She used his trust to cover her sick sexual needs. PERIOD.

She did not love him. His sole role was a sperm do not and emotional and financial support resource.

Why did she denied husband sex?

Psychology on her part? I could care less.

She did what she did. THERE IS NO coming back from the cold depth and longitudinal betrayal

Again, the causative reasons for her actions are, in a real and life operational sense, meaningless.

FIVE stars for usual great story and SIX for reality base...unusual for writers of these stories whose ending usually leaves tge man as a forgiving cuck. I'm on to parts 2&3 and pray for this character to remain true to himself.

Great story.

Rational and logical investigative approach.

Did not allow herr use the cheaters handbook.

Shove betrayal in her face and kicked her to the curb.

There is always that dumb shit crap about love , I know that she loves me ? are you all that twisted that you can accept the fact that she would screw someone into the throws of multiple organisms' When you think like a male . with the hard dick has no coconscious mentality , shows me your not much of a writer. Women have sex differently it's about reproduction and survival . She more than likely never really loved you, FACT you were a means to and her productive survival needs (Her Mate Pick) reproduction mandates ( Love was something she gave too others ).

Not giving the readers of this story even a hint as to the “why” drags this down from a 4+ to a 3- tale.

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Some think it’s “clever” to leave such a key piece of info…motivation….out. Nope. It was either cowardly or lazy.

Why ruin Stephanie's life, no need for that, he was a bitter twisted man. Yes I agree with others, I wanted to know why she did it, this isn't the normal cheating wife story, were the wife doesn't deny him his sex, were the wife falls for another man, she doesn't want his cock, but wants any one else's, it doesn't make sense. This authors worst ever story 2*

No ending ?

He may not have wanted to know what, but I did. Hence the 3 *.

@mccartyser, not finished? He dumped her slutty cunt, over and out!

At this point there was no reason to continue this story, this is a bizarre story as it is hard to imagine that wife cheats for years with multiple men and hubby does not pick up at least a suspicion, in particular because she is not giving him regular sex. That is bizarre but it makes for a surprise so let's give an author freedom to believe. But I don't see this moving on in any way other than to have technical details of a divorce.

Unfortunately, this author had a different idea and started messing it up in sequels.

It was not finshed, Just left you hanging

Why would the cheating bitch even act like she cared for him. She's free to openly be the whore she's always been.

Think about your comment. If the writers took your advice it would be "His wife cheated. He kicked her out." End of story.

but he might not have wanted to know why, but I wanted to know. lol

This is way way too over rated. He caught her. Backstory is pointless. He caught her pretty much in the act. The rest is meaningless filler.

When first we practice to become a whore

Good story, but not great.

I was disappointed at the lack of an ending.

All buildup no follow through. Just like HDK

really to have more of an ending

I think there could have been more.Ending seems a bit abrupt.

GLAD TO SEE THAT YOU ARE BACK ON YOUR GAME, OHIO, I WAS DISAPPOINTED IN A COUPLE OF YOUR STORIES. BUT, YOU CAME BACK WITH A STRONG MAN, BEING A MAN THOUGHTOUT THIS STORY, NO BACK SLIDING.

He did exactly the right thing. As a Policeman, he cannot touch his slut wife. He would lose his job immediately for hitting her. I am curious as to who else she was screwing, and why!!!

Everything else about this story was great, but it would have felt much more complete and satisfying if you had allowed her to explain why she was so sexually open to her lovers and not to her husband.

As emotional as it should be.

When you start turning over rocks. Glad to see you can write stories about husbands that still have big brass balls. Too bad he didn't use a gob of Astroglide and pop her ass, sounds like she would have enjoyed it, I know I would have. As for reality at this point it's still he said, he said, she said. Anon 7/12 if you can do better let's see it, time to put up or shut up. Let's see if Rob can hang on to his balls through chapter three. Signed: BTW

To have a story named after her brisket. Why do women think their marriage can be revived after they have murdered it? It's like they shot holes in all four tires on their automobile, and expect to drive away on four flat tires...love, trust, faithfulness, and honesty have all received life threatening, if not fatal damage.

but a little unsatisfying. Maybe he didn't want to know why but I sure would. It's just not very believable that she would be that stick in the mud with him and do all those things with someone else.

Is that he can't throw her out. It's her house too. And a policeman would know that. Of course when she talks to Mark and they go to the police and file a complaint, he's toast. Off the force and into jail. Threatening Mark and Ken with his gun, breaking Mark's nose, grabbing his wife and removing her from their home. He wouldn't stand a snowballs chance in hell in Court. There's no saving this messy story going forward. He's fucked it up too badly.

Well written

Why not important did it unless rape drugged etc no excuse

The best revenge, the real punishment is to let the daughters, friends and family know what she did. Just open the door and shed light on the crimes. Nothing more is needed but for her to live the rest of her life without her husband. That is the real revenge and it happens every day, although not all the time.

Just a story, a little quick fiction. It would be difficult to believe that a.wife could do this to a husband she claims to love. A great story about a man with super human restraint.

Why do some many authors write that a parent having an affair doesn't have anything to do with the kids? That's total BS. It affected the WHOLE family.

Its a shame, the man that's put a roof over her head provided warmth and comfort, a stable safe home, and he has to jack off to get sexual gratification , while she giving it away to everyone and anyone. As the two loves that he knows about, they both said there were others before them, but they didn't know who were. So what he said about her and their sex life right from the get go, she may well have been cheating throughout the entire marriage, seeing was in catering. Lots of men coming and going. Wink wink , nudge nudge. that's why I would get a DNA done. Im not saying, just saying.

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Appropriate results.

Why do they think they can justify their actions? Stay faithful or get out. It isn't more complicated than that.

crap is she would tell him that she wanted romantic love with her husband and felt she shouldn't be doing the dirty crap that she did with her whoremongers. All this is because she wanted to clean with her husband, but she also wanted to be dirty, so the cheating.

I would want to know why she did it. Not for her sake, but for my own sanity.

The guy wasted the best of his sexual active years with her, so to in order to accept and move on, he has to know.

On the other hand, she is clearly mentally disturbed, and cannot be trusted at all, so whatever she might have had to tell him during the time frame of this chapter really isn't worth anything. He was right to throw her out, and he was right in his attempt to break her, because that is likely the only way for her to regain a modicum of respect for the man and come to terms with the fact that her life as she knew it is over. After that she will to try and negotiate as a natural part of her grieving process, and if he stays firm, she will come to understand that honesty is her only chance to gain anything back.

She has lost her marriage, her home, her future, her beloved, and as far as she knows, her relationship with her children. My only concern is that she might march right out and commit suicide after the end of this chapter. Then our protagonist will have a much harder time finding the answers he needs to move on.

Well done again, ohio!

She wasnts to explain why. Does it fucking matter, whore? Can she explain away doing things for her lovers that she denied her husband, too? Fucking tramp

Great first chapter. Five stars

She never offered Rob a chance to participate, that's what was eating him. He made the right choice, she denied him a MMF fantasy. If my wife did that she'd be kicked to the curb too.

I would have liked to hear her justification of actions even though as Rob said, it doesn't really matter

Well, it seems very clear that, despite the title of this sad tale, the other tragedy is that Hubby didn’t take the time to fix and eat his Brisket sandwich.

A clear 5er! (as usually from Ohio.)

The rage was over the top in a sort of frantic way, which maybe is more realistic than PAPATOAD revenge, but the latter is immensely more interesting to read. You don't need to cry to show emotion, but every time this happens, an invitation to a brief pity party is sent out. You ever get one of those? I used to mail them out until I invented a machine to do it, from detection, identification, printing, folding, postage printing, and a funny looking android that I had to use when the post office workers started showing up to get the mail with shotguns in their hands...and put myself out of a job. I got one then, too. It was only a 20 minute party, but I enjoyed every minute.

It's fine for the author to finish the story where he did, but eventually he's going to want to know the why. I mean a possible explanation can be she was frigid and then she hit that age for women when they get much more sexual, or could be onset of menapause and she became very sexual but for some reason went outside the marriage. Or that something happened between them after several months after their honeymoon (did she get raped and became frigid). Did something happen between her and her husband.

My point is he is going to want to know at some point or it's going to bug him forever. It won't matter as far as him taking her back, but how can someone be your partner for 25 years and you not want to know what the fuck happened and how she was two different people. Plus for me the psychology of why people do what they do (sexual or otherwise) is so interesting and this story doesn't cover the most important aspect for me.

...points out that Helen very quickly, just months after marriage, began running down on the amount of sex she wanted. On this point, I stand corrected.

I believe the amount of sex dropped off, a great deal, after the kids were born. Now, was she prudish? Probably. Or he hadn’t yet “pushed” her very hard yet on that.

Also, there is no mention of Helen realizing he heard her singing. In fact, she may not have realized she was singing, or singing so loud as to be heard outside the showet. It’s not often something you’re really concious of doing... emoting you happiness. Also, she only finds out Rob knows 2 or 3 days after he tripped on it. She’s shocked and surprised that he even knew. Her mind is probably going a thousand miles an hour, or is running like molasses in winter. Either way, she’s probably not going to be thinking about if he’d heard her singing in the shower, or not.

Now, point I’d like to make/question is one thing “ohio” doesn’t ever do in his stories (as far as i can recall) is, after having found the adulterous act occurring in his marital bed he never throws out the mattress and bedding. In some of the stories he’ll have the protagonist sleep in the guest room because... well, because of the memory of the sight (or imagined sight if it’s just “evidence” of) the sex act. If he feels that strongly about it he would most certainly (at least I would) dipose of the matress, if not the whole bed, including box spring, frame, headboard, etc. Often the protagonist will throw the wife out, then go right on sleeping in the same bed. Or, sleep n the guest room, and eventually return to the, now soiled, marital bed. A reasonably good queen mattress runs just sub-$1000 today (2017... I’ve been mattress hunting recently). And a king mattress just a hundred or so dollars more. Surely not too expensive for the peace of mind of not sleeping in the same spot as the “deed(s)” occurred. It is a common plot ploy by many authors on LW, and I happen to think it a very good idea.

Otherwise... another superb story by ohio. 5-stars.

It's strange that she has a low libido, but had no problem having sex 3-4 times a week while they were courting and the first few months of marriage. Now beyond the "false advertising," if you will, she obviously CAN do it more than once every 10-14 days. I know it would kill the story, but why not compromise. I guess they DID, sort of, but her lack of enthusiasm surely kills the mood!

She knows he heard her in the shower, so she knows he heard her singing, very inconsistent with forced sex!

I can only repeat my comment from 9/14/15: "The cheating alone would be bad enough, doing it with people he knows adds insult to injury, but to be such a sexual animal after insisting for years that she just wasn't into that sort of thing is a real slap in the face!"

Doesn't need any more.

....just not finished!

Very entertaining story.

You obviously didn't read this: "I gently patted the pocket where I'd put the pictures of our daughters that I'd rescued from the family book. My memories of the girls were still precious to me."

a total change of pace from a great author. i felt it better as a standalone, and i really liked the main character. i thought it ended perfectly, but i really gotta know:

what was her recipe for brisket?

" I lay on top of Helen for a couple of minutes, holding my weight off her with my elbows, until she tried to wriggle out from beneath me. "C'mon, baby, let me go clean up."

"Not yet, Helen." I raised up to look at her face, and spoke in my friendliest voice. "How about if you use your mouth on me, and when I'm ready we can go again?"

Her face took on a look of intense distaste. "No Rob! You know I don't like that! How could you ask me to do that?"

Still looking right at her, I said gently, "how about if you just pretend I'm Mark Malchek?" "

Reconciliation / Divorce ? It doesn't matter. Those isolated lines assured full marks from me.

Yes she could fight for 1/2 of things and to get back into the house but she won't. She would be too embarassed and ashamed if everyone found out she was a lying, cheating cunt. Even her good lady friend couldn't believe it. She lived a lie for years cheating on him but everybody knew how much she loved her husband so it would kill her if people found out the truth about the cunt. So know she won't.

First off, the cheating cunt is absolutely right.

He CANNOT just throw her out. It takes a court order to make a spouse leave his/her home, and a cop would know that.

Second, he is an utter douchebag for throwing out the photo albums. Those are FAMILY memories and the family includes the daughters. Destroying irreplaceable mementos of the whole family's life was the act of a childish prat!

...but I would have liked to here her explanation. Just for fun.

Its a pointless read because Ohio sells out his characters and every emotion he puts in this story to force a reconciliation later. Reconciliation whore. 1*

It's been a long time.

I hope you don't fuck it up in Ch 2!

This author has a reputation, but it is undeserved, from what I can see. I won't read more. There is no ending to either story I have read and I don't enjoy police stories.

This is pretty crazy but I really liked it so far.

Interesting perspective and process for a cop.

unfinished cuck shit.

please do not let the next two parts bring reconciliation.

What did the asshole of LIT think was going to be in a LW story roses and candy!! Get a life you fucking retard!! I gave this a 5 to help offset the fools 1 vote!!

There is no other answer to this situation. In time, he will come to understand that she never loved him. She may have simulated love for him but by definition love is caring about another person. Cheating is proof of not caring. It is abuse. It is a statement that a fuck, an orgasm, a demented romantic interlude is more important than your spouse. That is the math. That is how it adds up. Anyone saying different is lying to themselves and the world.

VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT TRANNY BITCH FOOL VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!

he said it's the worst story ba ba ba ba like the fool tells us every day!!! Will I gave you a 5 to help offset the asshole's 1 vote. Eat shit annony!!!

One of the most horrible, depressing stories I have ever read. Nothing even remotely erotic about it. I guess it was only meant to please the haters out there that troll the loving wives section to post about how mad they are at the fictional characters in a erotic fiction site.

A happy ending. Ding dong the cunt is gone.

“you were a great guy, but she needed something extra” – It doesn’t make any sense! She needs something “extra”, but refuses anything extra with her husband!

As for the parting words,..."fuck you, you cheating cunt" I think would have been a nice touch!

5 *'s

It is just that simple, sometimes a delicious bowl of fruit goes bad before it's time and starts to rot. Soon it is covered with flies and it stinks. The only thing to do is to hold your nose and take out the trash.

The cheating alone would be bad enough, doing it with people he knows adds insult to injury, but to be such a sexual animal after insisting for years that she just wasn't into that sort of thing is a real slap in the face!

Seemed a tad angry.

No wonder prisons are full with nutjobs like that walking around.

Story is well written by ohio .

My wife would do anything for her dad and her other lovers but woul not o anything with me.

I woudl of liked to hear what was going on in her mind to at like she did.

What a crock! You just do not throw a wife out the door no matter what , you have to go thru the courts and he can be arrested and bared from the home .

Because Ohio couldn't stomach the idea of a man not being a wimp.

I'D certainly want to know why. Not why she cheated, but why an almost asexual woman not only needed outside sex, but wilder sex than with her husband.

Ohio wrote chapters 2 and 3 more than 2.5 years after this. WHY? This story did everything except let her explain "why"? But the only thing that MIGHT make sense would be contained in a document from her psychologist! I'll read the next two chapters, but I probably won't like them.

Especially after consulting with an attorney. He can't throw her out of the house. Legally she has as much right to be there as he does. Betrayal, no betrayal, regardless of the proof he has, she has as much right to be in the house as him. And he knew that. And I'm sure the attorney reminded him of that. So he's either going to need to move out (bad idea) or get used to the idea she's in the house and not going anywhere until the Court decides how the assets will be distributed. He may not end up with the house. Your ending ruined an otherwise good story. One other point. When he threatened Joe with his gun? He made a tape of the conversation. In a Court of law, he very possibly would lose his Badge and get thrown off the Police force for that action. Not a smart move.

Enough pain here in this well-written story to last me a long time. 5 stars.