All Comments on 'Brittany & Jon: Thrice Tempted Ch. 03'

These last two are right.

real good story after I got the chapters in the right order

o.k. no. 2&3 are in position. what will the intro be numbered? reader in nyc on a public computer.

This is the writer,

I have already sent in the correct Chapter One but it will be a few days before they replace the other one. Before friday the 19th probably. It has been taking them eight or nine days to post a submitted story lately.

Happy Reading

TabooTeller

PS have you read any of the other Brittany and Jon adventures?

With an uptight sanctimonious prig of a hubby like hers Tommy looks the better deal

I liked it, and went back to read the entire story, but I had some major problems with the plot in this part. The part with him "forgetting" that she was drugged and ran from the room screaming "no" was pretty farfetched. I thought he was setting a trap for Tommy, and I was disappointed in his character to see him just walk away...especially when he had figured out the DVD was fake. Also, Tommy had to know that he was busted for the drugs once she escaped, so why would he think that he wouldn't get in trouble for kidnap and rape? It was good, and made me stay with it the whole way, but I just liked the earlier chapters a lot better.

I read both series till the bitter end before I comment. I think you have probably been doing a lot of different drug that has made you think up such a convoluted confusing plot. It would have been simple if both Jon and Britiany were not mentally changeled as they were. Tommy was right out of a horror plot and britany was from a little miss muffet plot. Needless to say...both series stunk. married with balls@yahoo.com

Piece of garbage,characters are weak,story is to long,plot is weak,writer has no idea.

Tommy didn't suffer enough, Jon had time and opportunity to arm himself, and since he was injured he would have been wise, even motivated to arm himself, as he was protecting the love of his life. At the very least a 2x4 upside Tommy's head. Just good military tactics. Never heard of an equalizer. Oh well over all the story had some interesting approaches, and just was a nice love story. A romance would be nice for them.

a terrible writer. First of all the reader can't keep up with events. You keep jerking around so the reader can't tell what happened when. You have a disease ...it's called drug addiction and you should leave that crak along or coke or speed ...what ever it is but you do it or else you are just insane and should be institutionalized. After the incident with the cd Jon should have persued it and gotten to the truth about who made it. Then when he rescues her the second and took her to the hospital he should have went and kicked Tommie about till he broke every bone in his body. and then hurt him. Britany is a slut that wants to fuck all the guy's in the world and she is married to the dumb ass who will let her through his stupidity. No Brittany needs to be in a whore house earning some pimp a good living and Jon should just leave...where he goes or what he does is immaterial...juts leave and you should get serious help TT marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

This woman is nothing but trouble with so many different problems they cant be listed. Divorce her she isnt worth the time or the money. YOu helped her out of her self induced problems and kick her to the curb and find a woman, who is an adult, who loves you.

low budget films. OW no need to read more of these stories they are like this one just plain bad.

Like it, martial sex is always romantic, i dont know why some people here think of jon as a wimp and birtt as slut. And if people think, she should not go parties or danced she wont be in trouble then. Then what story you expect here, remember story is made when someone do something one should not. How far one goes that is different and decides how happy ending it would be. so i liked it and liked it very much. first one was really the best one. One more thing every time she said no it was her own decision. So i liked her character also. Jon did what a normal husband should do. And there are always predators like Tommy. thats why we read story to see they succeed or not.

Certainly after an illegal drugging a felony, Tommy would not go for weeks without being arrested.

And Brittany & Jon would have been arrested for indencent exposure for allowing children to see them have sex and since they allow Tommy to watch, they are also allowing children to watch.

stopped writing

.......... the whole 'Tempted' series. Didn't even bother to click the stars. Again.

Sorry.

Shoulda, woulda, coulda, divorced her and left all the pain behind him.

another cocksucking fag posting dumb cuck SHIT.

I had planned out a lengthy philosophical comment. I discarded those drafts.

Over two series, six chapters, twenty plus pages you kept this reader in a feverish state of desperate suspense.

With Brittany as a model, I fought off the temptation of

instant gratification and did not succumb to the almost overwhelming impulse to jump to the final page.

To my mind you have authored the ultimate predatory seduction story. Thank you for this ''ultimate ending'' analogy wherein GOOD TRIUMPHS OVER EVIL!

Did not know Two Seductions was middle part of trilogy.

Was confused about Steve character....

Good may have come out ahead of evil, but no longer the Triumph I thought

Good won split decision but took battering resulting in ER visit-hospital admission-extended physical therapy before being released

Some of it I liked, a lot not so much. Pretty good story overall. Don't think Job can trust her. Keep an eye on her.

These two characters are too stupid to live. Was it their religious upbringing? Idk. My own family never spoke of sex growing up in the 70’s p, it was taboo. Something for after marriage in private. This series pushes that a bit too much. She put herself in a bad spot needlessly and Jon went along with it.

Just stupid

Not a bad story other than it is way too drawn out,going over the same things in different ways. As presented your characters are hard to accept that they really could actually exist.No women could constantly put herself in such positions so often and a husband that would not just walk away from her for doing so,but the tale was good enough to read through...JZK

She didn't put up much of a fight for someone being raped. No frantic thrashing, no attempts to scratch or poke eyes, I mean really? Not very believable.

At least she said sorry for all her shit in the end. She finally grew up and learned to take accountability for her actions. Her parents would be so proud of her. And all it took was nearly losing her marriage and an attempted rape. Well at least this circus comes to a close.