All Comments on 'Bro and Sis Homestay Guests'

A relatively new author. I have been following her stories and her development as a writer. She has an easy-flowing banter style often almost like a stage play, crisp wit. I suspect the writer is an Anglophile, or maybe English herself. Her characters are realistic. Average to small dicks, average to flat tits, sags and flabs, caesarean cut lines, etc. Never afraid to engage inconvenient reality. Her sex action style is paced teasing frissonic. If you are aching for loud bruising sex, you will be disappointed.

This story plays off a pair of mature (40’s / 50’s) sibling homestay guests who are intimate, with a pair of young (30’s) sibling hosts who have never given any thought about each other sexually. As events unfolded, fueled by the increasing sibling guests’ demonstrated intimacy, the latter explored their sexuality. I wont say more, to not give the story away. An enjoyable read.

There were things which detracted from the story itself. I understand that it's difficult to edit one's own writing, but too many sentence fragments is difficult to over come. As a stylistic medium, in the heat of battle to raise the rate at which the readers' synapses fire is good, but their regular occurrence is difficult to stomach.

I found the conversation style of a playwright a huge distraction. It destroyed the otherwise nice flow of the read. One should either write prose or a play, and not a mixture. Without that fault, my enjoyment of the work would have increased immensely.

I am not up on the difference in British English and American English, if there is any, and some of the grammatical problems could be accounted for with this. Far be it from me that one should cater only to the Americans, but a brush up on grammar could result in better writing.

Having said that, I will say that I enjoyed the story. The pace was nice, quicker than plodding, but adult in its cadence. It was what would expect from characters so far removed from hormone driven teens.

The descriptions, both of the players and the environs, were enjoyably thorough. I would have liked to know more precisely the geographic location. This knowledge would have given the reader a more complete frame of reference.

Overall a nice experience.

Loved the story overall although a few missed opportunities for additional interesting directions the four of them could have taken. Would have been five stars, but - frankly hated the last few paragraphs of the ending, especially the last one. Sorry.

Dear mwm2016,

I understand your sentiments completely.

I myself agonized over the ending. But I decided to go with it, for reasons

that do not wholly resonate with total self.

Such are the vagaries of writing. You challenge your craft, as much as you

challenge yourself, for reasons that are not entirely always explicable.

Thank you for your support and reading.

Saula, you outdid yourself! This was a great story with an awesome build up to the conclusion. I love how you ended the story - this was just a fleeing experience made possible by the guests.

Nice interplay of emotions between the intimate mature sibling guest pair, and

the younger sibling host pair who has never given thought to how they relate to each

other sexually. Deft and clever juxtapositioning of intimate/asexual, mature/young as

the narrative unfolds. I love the characters. All very real and relatable. No King King

dicks, no mammoth tits.

This is the third such story by Saula in the homestay realm, and our second feedback to Saula on such stories. These stories resonate with my husband and me. This is a lovely story. My hubby and I run an Airbnb room in our country home for a good 5 years to-date. In that time we have hosted 3 intimate mum-son pairs and 2 sibling pairs. So this is more common than one thinks. In 3 of these 5 cases, the pairs were subtle about their outward intimacy, unabashedly touchy feely and all, but not much more outside of the cosy confines of their room. In 2 of the cases, one mum-son and the other a sibling pair, they were upfront candid about their relationship, communicated in oblique but clear language, and once established, their outward actions were openly intimate but civil, and respectful to my hubby and I as hosts. In the mum-son case, the mum hinted at a 4some. My hubby and I are mature in our sixties. I was tempted at the delicious prospect of being serviced by the young man, and had an interesting discussion with my hubby as we have never been particularly adventurous. The mum was quite delectable too. But, that is a story for another day...

Still would have been so hot/complete for Jane and John to have progressed into a surprise, yet very erotic, demonstration of brotherly/sisterly Love, in front of Cole and Chloe's own mutual love. Then of course Cole and Chloe to follow suit. ...that would have been the prefect ending.

5 stars because I had a similar homestay hosting experience about a year & a half ago. This story resonates with me. My sis & I are both widowed in our 60s. To optimize expenses, we live together for practical reasons, & run an Airbnb hosting operation of one room to help defray our expenses, & to meet interesting people all over the world.

We hosted a mid-30s couple from Sth America. We had assumed they are bf/gf or husband/wife, & they didnt say much about themselves. But, their looks & mannerisms were uncannily similar. Cousins maybe? Our social media trail checks seem to indicate that they are siblings. Suffice to say, they were intimate but in always a polite & measured away, as a regular couple would be. Like he would rub suntan lotion all over her in our open patio. They would smooch in our patio pool late in the night when all is quiet. Of course, what they do in their room, we are none the wiser.

With this going on for a month, which was the duration of their stay, it awoke something between my sis & me, & this didnt escape the notice of our guests. My sis & I didnt reach the level of the homestay hosts bro/sis in this story, but we had mutual good moments. Enough said.

I shared this story with my sis. She has read it like, many times. She is thinking of us going for a homestay holiday somewhere far away in a reversal of roles.

Saula, thank you for writing our story even though you didnt intend to. Maybe you can write for us? We will contact you separately...

The more I read here the more I realize that what I thought was not common is actually something my sister and I have in common with many other siblings. Such a shame that society considers something so beautiful and natural so taboo.

I absolutely love reading your stories.

Another great read. I'm sure enjoying all these stories. Mmmmm

Another wonderful story from this author, such reality and description adds to the excitement and some innocence. I'll be reading more... and more... xTom