All Comments on 'Broken'

by ofloveandlust

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CZOFTWCZOFTWover 3 years ago
Filthy story

But incredibly beautiful and moving. I want to read more about this couple.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5 stars

Pretty powerful. You're incredibly underrated on this site, definitely a top 10 author. All I'd ask is to check the grammar, at times the errors are distracting.

ErisJadeErisJadealmost 8 years ago
Wow.....!!!!

I absolutely loved this! So deep and dark and grimy and raw. 5 stars all the way! Thank you for sharing!

sbabsbabalmost 8 years ago
we are all in some way...

broken. I know the feeling too well and to be quite honest with you I was waiting for a different result. '

I had a lifetime with my husband and it wasn't enough. I was scarred and he made me feel beautiful. there is a difference between making love and having sex. it is wonderful in a marriage when the want becomes a need. by having his first relationship he learned what love truly is. As stated he had seen her nude before, but it took him time to really see her.

bravo

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