by Doc Redfield
This scenario isn't even one of my personal button-pushers. But this particular story reached down deep and touched a darkness inside of which I was not aware. It actually touched off a minor cathartic episode. Thank you.
it was a little extreme, you write very well and paint a very visual picture of the debasing scene. Impressive work.
Not many people have commented, but I just want you to know that this is one of the most erotic stories I have read yet, and I've read a few. I first read this about a year ago, but did not comment. Kudos.
excellent story! very well written with wonderful imagery
I stumbled onto this story while looking for Dark Angel fic (not sure if the similarities to that show were meant or it was just a fluke coincidence) but wow, just wow. This story was fantastic, hard to believe it's been on this site for 7 plus years and I've never found it before.
I just have to say that this is probably my favorite erotic story that I have read in a long, long time. It's a shame I didn't find it sooner.
This got me wet and kept me there the whole story, I just found you and it's been a while since I was enraptured on Lit. Now I've to go relieve some tension or I'd wax more poetic. Thank you.