by merlainealyssa
Has the alluring bitterness of dark chocolate and that's too hard to resist. I look forward to the next chapter.
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You got my attention so far. Very intriguing. Its dark and brooding. I like it. There's an air of mystic to it and I can't wait to read the next chapter(s).
Nicely set up. I can't wait for Gabriel to save the girl...
Some girls are not as fortunate as others, and indeed live life in so desperate conditions.The author is opening the ugly side of society that some may not want to see. Thanks........Rich
and this opening gets it spot on. Very skilfully written, this looks like being a fine story. Thanks. -- UK CYNIC