All Comments on 'Broken Shield Ch. 06'

This story is a very enjoyable read, thank you! I have no clue why your first chapter isn't rated far, far better - my only thought is that people are perhaps annoyed with the length of the chapters?

I will say this one in particular is *very* short, and it feels like a lot of these are more scenes within the first chapter than chapters themselves. (But hey, you're the author - organize it however works for you, and whichever way keeps you writing.)

Anyways, I look forward to new chapters showing up in my feed. Thanks!