All Comments on 'Broken Shoulders'

Definitely we want another chapter. Mom's point of view stories are very hot. I sent a message to you through the contact option in your profile have. About 2 mom 2 son story & some suggestions

I love you story. Please continue. So erotica and the level of detail from your perspective has me on edge! Look forward to more of this tale

Need to continue the story, you have peak the interest

Thanks so much for your writing

Very well wrote

Michael

You absolutely should keep writing. This is a first for me in the way you have written your story. It does seem the mother beats herself up quiet a bit more than one would think, considering her state of arousal. I do like her approach and how she weighs out the good, bad and ugly before she acts. There at the end of the story when she loses her shit and starts putting all the blame on her son, I kinda thought it was extreme for her to rip all her clothes off while chewing his ass and start showing him all her goods but causing him to breakdown and cry himself. Poor kid is in a cast and can't even wipe his own ass much less his tears she's causing him. BAAAAAD momma...lol.. I'd like to say, your story draws me in and it's like I can truly feel the struggle throughout the entire story. You have written very well and I hope you will continue..5⭐...

Yes more please! That was so good

More, please

Waiting for part two now.

Great. More to the story can’t wait

Yes, definitely need more. Where is this going to go?!

Please release part 2 ASAP. I am BEGGING you

Part 2 is currently Pending publishing - has been for 6 days now so I'm not sure of the problem. Hopefully you guys will get to read it soon - and I hope you enjoy it.

Awesome story just waiting on part 2 and have mom have sex with her son and maybe daughter finds out and has been wanting to have sex with her brother and she joins them and a threesome unites them all together and maybe some babies come along!!!!!!!!!! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!

i want to read the next part!

Very hot!

ABSOLUTLEY LOVED IT. Thank you so much for all the work you put into it.

Wow, what a build-up.

What a story very written getting all the emotions and pleasure at the same time. Keep up the good work.