Broken Vows Ch. 1

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Mary screamed against his hand, the cords of her neck standing out as she flung her head back against the arm of the couch. Her legs clamped shut on Father Kirk’s hand as the orgasm pulsated through her vagina and belly and down the muscles in her legs. She arched upwards, bowing her back and pressing her bottom against his rigid, throbbing cock. She felt the juices gush out of her vagina and onto his hands soaking his robes beneath her, soaking his cock. It seemed to last forever and when it was over, Mary blacked out, her body going limp.

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

malapropisms...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great story but...

I have to say the constant misspelling of the word massage took me back several times. Misspellings have a way of distracting. Can keep you from getting sucked into an otherwise delicious story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Very Stimulating

I agree with the previous comments! Very well-written. Vivid and enticing! I am excited to read the next chapter! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great descriptions

Good story. Very vivid descriptions

BADSAM689BADSAM689about 16 years ago
Great Story!

A very well written story. It was very descriptive and made me feel as though I was right there in the room with the two of them. I wish I could write as well as you. I look forward to reading the sequals. Thanks.

relo22relo22about 17 years ago
I Wish

I didn't mind her passing out at all. Hell, I wish I had a man that could make me pass out just from finger fucking me. If he's that good with his fingers just think how good he'll be with his dick! Regardless of size!

Vixen WildeVixen Wildeover 18 years ago
I liked this...

I definitely wanted to read more. I liked how you made the reader feel they were there in the way you described things. I do have to agree with one comment made above, having her 'black out' was a bit of a let down, more so because the story ends right there. Too bad it didn't continue after that. I came here after reading your poem and am very happy I did. I want to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
The story was

well written, engaging and erotic. My only regret is the black out at the end...it never does it for me to not have the continuation of the two characters (or more). Passing out is so....victorian..lol

sweetivylynsweetivylynabout 19 years ago
Nothing Like a Great Nun and Priest Story

I think you speak from experience, my friend! Great visuals; Reminds me of "the old days" (early 60's; I had a few crushes on some of the priests that I remember from back then....hmmmmmmm....maybe it's time for confession!

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