All Comments on 'Brokering Trust - Gay Edition'

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I read this in 4 hours. I LOVED it. I gave the hetero version a glance over and I can honestly say Gay All the Way. I can't wait on reread this much more slowly to savor it

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

In some ways it's a pity David had to kill it, but then I guess the Brokers just don't have an equivalent of tic tac toe that he could have played with WOPR... I mean, Weaver. Anyway, loved it, and I also can't wait to see how you unfold that final revelation about the Bugs in some later story.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I kinda wanted David to bottom more. Also when you noted that the shower area didn't have cameras, I expected it would've been part of a smut scene in the earlier chapters. But all of that's just nitpicking. This otherwise great novella!

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