All Comments on 'Brooke's Naughty Request Ch. 01'

I loved this story. I loved it for a few reasons: the most obvious being that is extremely sexy. The descriptions and detail you go into are very real and concrete, and therefore easy to imagine.

A second reason is that it is a real story. It's not just a quick read that is focused solely on sex. The characters are very real and so is the plot line. And that greatly builds anticipation to what is going to happen next.

In your intro you said you are not an erotic story writer--you very well could be. You are a fantastic writer and you actually put meaning into the story, as well as the erotic component.

Very well done-keep it up.

Looking forward to chapter 2.