All Comments on 'Brother & Sexy Sister Ch. 02'

Wow lol, this was even better than the first part, yes it wasn't a long story and was quite short but it was a awesome story.

you should write some more chapters maybe a 3rd 4th n 5th ;) great story

it only gets a 25 because it was never finished after 5 years it never will so a low score it would have got a 75 or 100 if it had been finished with atleast 1-2 more chapters

If there is something that spoils a story for me, it is anal.

A dick should be thumping the hell out of a cervix, not an asshole.

Barefoot and pregnant RULES.

Good story but you need to learn how to use the words Lay and Laid correctly and not use the use the word "lied", which is what you did in both short stories. Sorry, I did enjoy both stories but incorrect grammar makes me crazy.