All Comments on 'Brother and Sister'

It was alright. I din't know what I expected, but this was tame.

I won't lie, this was a bit disappointing. The thought is there, but this reads like a rushed summary of a great story that could have been. I'd go back, put in the time for detail, descriptions, and dialogue, then republish your story. Hope to see more stories from you soon.

a 17 yr old medical school student and not very bright??????? author you need to rethink this one...GEEZ

And not the ones filled with a penis.

Lacked flow and needed some authenticity.

Keep going, storyline was good.

This felt like a good start to something, but wasn’t complete enough to call a full story. Other people have stated as much, but the general flow was too fast, with a lot of messy time skips. The sex scenes were short and honestly lackluster. And the romance angle, which should have been fleshed out a lot more, felt fairly flat.

Now, don’t take this as reason to totally abandon this idea. I believe you have the makings of a good bro/sis erotic romance here, it just needs work. Definitely recommend a good editor. A second set of eyes never hurts.

please continue

I like mom and son better, but this

was a change and I liked it. It was

well done and easy to read, it was

a little short ,can we get more??.

..THANKS..

Not very much to it. The sex scene was short and decidedly not sweet. The introduction of Cassie was a nice idea, but very much underplayed. A nothing story.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

a good well written story that is way tooooooo rushed. This story has so much potential but the author just rushed through it just hitting high points. This story needs at least one more page if not two. That, along with the author's innate talent, had so much potential.

Nice story but too short, lacked detail and depth. 4/4

Nice story but wish it could've been a bit longer, going deeper into the "reunion" at least. 4 stars -- Bill

See? They didn't know they were brother and sister and have a nice loving relationship. When they learned that they were, they still continued on. It was just knowledge; it doesn't really affect anything. Most people would get all up inside their heads about this sort of thing once they knew, and would foolishly throw away a wonderful future, but thankfully these two had more sense. I guess what I'm trying to say is: all that matters is how you feel. Don't sweat the details or what others think :)