All Comments on 'Brother and Sister'

Predictable but very hot, I'm a sucker for a happy ending.

Good story, buy why pay to fuck your sister?????????????

Loved it. I love these accidental incest/escort stories. This one was well done!

It was rushed and obvious. Develop the plot, keep the imagery bright and colorful. Describe the pussies he fucked. Help us imagine them. What sound did his whores make when he fucked them? What did the wet pussies sound like when stuffed with good cock? Describe his dick. 6", 8", 12"? What are these sluts coming to? What is he paying them to handle? Did he just suck his sisters nipple like a prepubescent school boy? Have him nip them, bite them, tug them them painfully. Describe her pain and refusal for him to stop. What's her cunt doing while the tit are getting attention? Is she masturbating? Have her hold her tits so he can finger her cunt. Unrequited lust means doing everything. Throw in a 69. Describe their legs wrapped around each other. Have his try to finger her asshole as well. He's fulfilling his dream of fucking his sister.

My older brother and I fucked for 12 years which included the first three years of him being married. It was wild and untamed. You cant write about fucking a whore if you've never barreled into one and you cant tell the story of fucking your sister if she's never spread her legs for you. If you're a virgin, you need to change that, but the next time you fuck a woman, video tape it and write the details. Regardless of the plot, the details have to right!

Keeping fucking, keep writing.

Loved the premise.

In New York prostitution is no longer a crime.

Why mot add incest?

Can’t wait for the next chapter!

No kissing?

Great buildup, and the sisters reaction to their first time was really hot. This has the makings of a great series and I hope that you will continue it soon. Well done 5++++stars

Escort Susan waa shortchanging the brother....she found his sex life a joke yet she is just a call girl, LOL

Didn't care for the sister. She's still the demanding bitch of a sibling even though she's a trollop.

Curious. If he was fucking her doggy how were his balls hitting her bottom? Decent bro/sis escort story tho.

Second time just as good.

Can’t wait for the follow up

You have a gift for the brother sister story. This was your best. Funny how good an escort story could be. I guess I've read this twice maybe three times? I know what I like. I appreciate no huge cock 40 DDD tits. 5

Very well written! Not too much not too little, would've enjoyed a longer version but definitely not complaining!

Look forward to reading more of your stories

5 Stars dude

Just about a month ago, someone commented anonymously, "I appreciate no huge cock 40 DDD tits."

I have to agree wholeheartedly. The unreasonable and unrealistic descriptions of the genitalia in most of these stories usually ruin their value. In spite of the fact that both of my exes have D cup or larger breasts, I have never been a fan. I actually encouraged them to think seriously about breast reduction surgery but the first wife was satisfied with what she had. The second wife would have gladly taken me up on the offer, but neither one of us ever had a medical insurance plan that would have covered the costs.

My personal preference is for something just slightly larger than a handful. 🙃 A small C at the largest.

Now that I have given you the 🥕 carrot, here's the stick: I only gave you a three out of five because you didn't promote any affection between the siblings. It was just a fuck. There wasn't even any brother/sister fraternal love between these two. I can find plenty of FUCK stories in the Erotic Couplings section if I wanted to read that stuff. I needed a love story and you failed to deliver it. 3/5

Great story, but I'd have liked us to be there to enjoy the next time too!

Your story was very good and the editing made it easy to read. I was a little disappointed that they never kissed, call me a romantic but now that leaves an opening for a sequel and hotter sex. Thanks for writing it's much appreciated 😊

Great story!!!

Loved it!

There was no mention of calling Grace and asking for and receiving a refund so she still owes him one.