All Comments on 'Brother and Sister Make a Bet'

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redlion75redlion75over 1 year ago

Dad's fucking his daughter and let's the son feel guilty about him fucking his mom?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting twist. I certainly didn’t see that coming.

5*

Tc

mathur_nkmathur_nkover 1 year ago
Open up now for brother and sister.

Good story. Now the sister can open up with brother. Also brother with mother openly

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Quick and too the point. But did mom really not know? Kind of a fun idea to consider.

DanDraperDanDraperover 1 year ago

That was a very interesting ending there. Although with the way things seem to be with this family, it wouldn't surprise me if the mother didn't care at all and wanted more of what she just had.

5-stars.

FeltfixerFeltfixerover 1 year ago

If this story had reached the expected end, the father would have confessed to

have concocted the experiment with his wife and daughter.

The wife knew her husband was fucking his daughter and wanted a piece of the action with her son. If the title included chapter 1, I wouldn’t have posted

this comment fully expecting this outcome to be revealed in chapter 2.

It is inconceivable that the wife wouldn’t know it wasn’t her husband on the bed

(Even accounting for alcohol)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Didn't like the twist at the end

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearover 1 year ago

Overall a good story.

The sis and father messing about was a bit predictable though (just helpful criticism). I figured it out as soon as she said she could fix it quickly. Not much character development either but if this is a stand alone quickie it doesn't require it. I enjoyed it. Thanks for Sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good fun and well worth reading, and a clever ending, which I only guessed a couple of paragraphs from the end. But too short to be a real humdinger of an incest story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Should have seen the end twist coming but was to busy enjoying the story, nicely done.

muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Predictable cliche' story except son didn't fuck his sister.

NudeInMaineNudeInMaineover 1 year ago

Good story. I was expecting her to say on the drive home, “son, I had a great time, how about you?”

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Somewhat lacking in credibility and, as an FYI, only about 5% of a cumshot is from your balls.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ignore the dillweeds. It was a nice little story. I suspected sis was fucking dad all along, but wasnt completely sure until you told us. Good job 5/5

Dewey Cheatham

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Would have liked for him to fuck his sister too.

Tall78701Tall78701over 1 year ago

Yes, many predictable cliche's. Chris, your stories all sound the same. But with over 3,000 followers, I guess that is what they want. It would seem like his voice would have been a dead give-a-way, and kissing with a mask on would have been all but impossible. And as others have suggested, I'm sure mom knew and it was just payback for the daughter fucking dad. But I realize it's fantasy.

Tom19851Tom19851over 1 year ago

Eine sehr tolle geschichte

FoggyKernelFoggyKernelabout 1 year ago

Well that's fucked up. He gets to bed his mother, comes home feeling guilty only to have his sister revel that her and his dad have been fucking. So he gets the shitty end of it?

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