All Comments on 'Brother Catches Me Masturbating!'

More please

A good first story, no typos or grammar problems, you could do more details in my opinion. You did very well and I hope to see more stories under your name soon.

Not bad for your first. You do need to explain a little detail about her and her brother's relationship. Otherwise, it sounds too much like rape. No siblings should just be taken like that. You should have had a little run up to the sister having untold feelings for him and her wanting to engage in sex with him. Just a thought. Keep writing perhaps a continuation of this story and turn it into something special. Not just a quick fuck. A reader in Florida

Nicely written story about an incestuous quickie. Sort of like an old-time cop showboat TV; just the facts mamme, just the facts.

Perhaps a few more descriptive details, just to fill out the story?

Very nice. Very sexy and exciting. It certainly got me 'going' (or cumming)! Also its short and sweet - gets the jobs done!

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It’s too short, it felt rushed. In your next, add more details and really play out the sex minute by minute