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Click hereAnna parted her lips and took Jeremy's cock into her mouth. Jeremy moaned as Anna sucked his cock. After a short time sucking, she looked back up at Jeremy. "I think it's ready."
Anna moved off his dick getting on her back, readying herself for Jeremy's cock. Jeremy got over Anna and slowly pushed his dick into her pussy. Unlike the other times they attempted to make a baby, Anna was responding to the cock pumping in and out of her pussy. Jeremy was trying hard to keep his focus on Anna and her reactions. He wanted to be sure she orgasmed before he deposited his seed.
Jeremy found that kissing her hard nipples increased her moaning and squirming. Her small tits were very sensitive to Jeremy's kisses. Anna's breathing became heavy and her hips began to buck. "Yes, yes, I'm cumming," Anna moaned.
Jeremy pumped faster bringing himself to the edge. He grunted, driving his cock as far into Anna's pussy as he could. He shook, shooting his semen deep inside Anna. With his cock still in her, he lifted up so Anna could slide a pillow under her ass. He started to move off to pull his dick out of her.
Anna reached to hold Jeremy tight. "Please stay inside me for a moment." Anna pushed her lips to Jeremy's. "Thank you," she said, kissing him passionately.
After a few minutes, Anna released her grip on Jeremy and let him slide out of her to lay next to her on the bed. "Wait a minute. Jeremy, if Macy didn't tell you that we agreed to dispense with the rules did she tell you about her idea of 'fair is fair'?"
"Fair is fair? What does that mean?" Jeremy asked.
"Oh shit, she didn't talk to you about it either. She said that if it was fair for you and me to have sex, it was only fair that she and Jackson have sex. I think they were going back to your house and she was going to offer herself to your brother. He didn't know about it either. Are you mad?" Anna said.
"I have to admit that it is logical. I am lying naked in my brother's bed having just had great sex with his wife. It is a little hard for me to complain that he is having sex with my wife. Are you okay with them fucking?"
"To be honest, going into tonight I was not very happy that your wife was going to have sex with my husband. I so desperately want to be a mom that I figured that was the sacrifice I had to make. Now I have a different opinion. We had great sex that I let myself enjoy. It doesn't change how I feel about my husband. It was as Macy put it, 'just sex with a purpose'. I just hope he feels the same way and making your wife orgasm too."
"All I know is that I'm excited about the 'just sex with a purpose' we are going to have for the next few days."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoMeh. These must be w va couples in de montains cuz despite working, they aint gots enuf scratch to get a medical institution to take bro As sperm and shoot up it up into bro Bs wife. man o man, i smells an intra family feud a brewin'. rk
Anonymousover 1 year agoSo much missing from this story. Not telling the donor that the others had agreed to his wife fucking his brother would be a real deal breaker to me regardless what I had agreed to. Trashes the story.
Bill S.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoOrgasm has ZERO effect on pregnancy. A scrotum injury cannot cause infertility! Crushed testicles might. Otherwise nice story.
Anonymousover 4 years agoThe previous Anonymous (titled: three things), is apparently complaining about the category. While he is right that there was no incest, the category is not "Incest," but "Incest/Taboo."
Anonymous also opines, "this should be in loving wives." Since Literotica's description of Loving Wives does include "married extramarital," that would be a fitting category. However, since the sex was also taboo, it is not wrong to be in its present category.
Anonymous also thinks "she cheated," because "getting pregnant does not include tonguing balls."
BUT, remember that the two wives agreed to no rules, and specifically that meant doing what was enjoyable and insuring orgasms. So, was the kissing on lips OK with Anonymous, but not on balls? The wives drew no lines so as to exclude a certain type of foreplay. They said "no rules." Anonymous made a rule so he could criticize the story.
Now, me.
I got to the end, but did not feel like I was at the end.
The "sex with a purpose" was to have a baby.
The story ends with no baby.
Issues were raised about how relationships would be affected. The resulting aftermath of those issues were not addressed.
Assuming a baby, was it a boy? Girl?
How does Jeremy feel about his biological child being raised by his brother's son?
How does Jackson feel about his "son" actually being the son of his brother?
Does any of the four wish for a repeat of sex with the
in-law? If so, how do they broach the subject? What happens?
To me, it seems inconsistent that Working Girl with such a great resolution, was written by the same author who penned this story with its inadequate resolution.
And it's reflected in the respective ratings.
One clever device in this story. Instead of reporting the initial sexual episode, the author waited to have Macy insist that Jeremy give her the details. Nice one.
In fact, the sexually open Macy (both in talk and actions) was a nice contrast in the story to the repressed Anna.
Good story -- as far as it went.
Too bad it did not go further.
Paul in Oklahoma
Anonymousabout 5 years agoIts not incest to fuck someone who isnt your family - your brother in law is not your brother so it int incest
people get pregnant from broken condoms so they could use a turkey baster
this should be in loving wives as she cheated - getting pregnant sex doesnt include tonguing balls
Anonymousabout 5 years agoWhy is it constantly the male that has the problem? In fact my eggs are very thick walled, I doubt ill ever have children naturally, but trying is still great fun.
Freddog6601about 6 years agoAs others have stated, get an editor. The story premise is good. It is a story that could be pulled and rewritten, cleaning up the grammatical errors, and also adding to the ending. This could be a story with legs.
Anonymousover 6 years agoeasy answer for this is the old turkey baster method. same results without making everyone scum of the earth trash...
RockyStoneover 6 years agoI haven't looked at your profile yet, so I don't know how much you have written. The story comes out sort of awkward. Frankly I don't see how the brother was able to have sex with his sister-in-law dressed. My personal thought was, "fuck that; I want actual sex!" There is zero chance I would agree to have sex like that. Perhaps some sort of interlude after dinner to get things started. A drink or two and then hop into the sack for some fun. It's your story, so it goes how it goes in your head. In my head; I would be having a lot more fun with it. Keep writing and get some real advice from other authors.
RS
Anonymousover 6 years ago....but overall, not bad at all.
I read the first couple of paragraphs where you used at least three tenses and nearly gave up, but I persevered to the end.
I think you need advice on how to write coherently with a decent editor overseeing your efforts. I know they are not easy to obtain, but at least try because you do have potential.
SomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 6 years agoI had to read that first sentence at least a half-dozen times, trying to make sense of it. The rest of the first few paragraphs should have included a chart to sort out who's who.
Here's a suggestion: read out loud, and if it's a little confusing for you, it's going to a lot confusing for anyone else.
