All Comments on 'Brother In Law Spends The Night'

Very sexy! Please more dares!!!

This was an excellent story that I enjoyed reading very much. I really think that it needs a sequel that puts a smile on your face as well as your hubby's. He needs

to be woke up so he can see how wet you really are and give you a cream pie to take back to your hubby watching from the bedroom, the story could go on for some time,but you be the judge of how far and how hot it gets and I will enjoy reading how kinky you and your hubby choose to get.

Thanks,

Al

I love the innocence of this story and the author behind it. If you never write another story, although I hope you do, you have expressed your excitement and feelings for you husband and your marriage as well as anyone I have read. Good authoring, might be helped by a bit of editing, and so refreshing. Good work, I love it. T

exciting without being over the top

I could almost feel Nicole's inner excitement building as she kept 'uping the ante' in her exhibitionist adventure.

In the next chapter, perhaps Mike suddenly opens his eyes & says to his naked sister-in-law: "I was hoping that you'd try this again !!!"

She climbs on & they start having sex as her naked husband walks out of the bedroom & sits down in his Lazy-boy recliner to better view the show on the couch !!

This story does need the help of an editor, though.

That's become sort of a hobby of mine. [For my eyes only so far.] I correct punctuation, change of few words here & there to make it flow better, & break-up half page paragraphs so they make more sense & are a lot easier to read. I find it to be fun for me & I feel satisfaction in doing it.

Keep writing, You had some very creative ideas for Nicole.

Thanks everyone for viewing my story/experience. I'm really glad that I finally shared it. Love the comments and feedback I'm getting too!

Just want to say a big thankyou for that story. Really was the best i have read in a long time. Very realistic and very interesting. I will keep a look out for another one by yourself. THANKYOU X

I loved the whole concept. It was naughty but not dirty. I could almost visualize the events as they happened.

Can't wait to read the next part!

That was a great story and I hope you write more. The pulling back on that one night was so tantalizing and writing about her thinking about it every day makes it even better! Can't wait for more. Butler789@hotmail.com

Loved it. Really kinky ... .

Excellent writing, definitely needs a sequel

My wife and I had a threesome with two of my brothers separately. It was one of the biggest turn-ons I've ever felt. She used to love it as well.