All Comments on 'Brother Love Ch. 03'

The hook is set

I don't know how this ended up on erotic couplings, it's part of a series I have in the non erotic section. Technophobia, a condition I suffer greatly from, must have reared it's ugly head again. Apologies

QHML1

after reading this tale.....you have reinforced the notion I have that you would be a very interesting fellow to talk with.....as in conversations you'd like to have. I am a voracious reader of all genres, always look forward to your next submission...it matters not to me where you place the story....the quality of your work speaks for itself and will shine where ever its placed

I'm gonna really enjoy this series of stories!

You've infused your story with the same sense of spontaneity and freeform as the tv show. I'll be watching for your following chapters. BTW, thank you for sharing your talents at no charge. I'm feeling blessed by your generosity.

..... but what paintings were on the wall for the last show? :-)

Most enjoyable series of stories. I sincerely hope to be reading them for many months to come.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Please keep them coming.

Brujay

Great idea and presentation. Your work is exceptional, always leaves me thinking.

We're all patiently waiting. From the onset it appears to be a great series that has started. Hopefully, it won't fizzle due to neglect. Keep the faith!

I believe you meant to reference Richard Thompson not David Thompson.

I think you meant Winterland, not Winter Palace. Just a quibble.

Great story very entertaining.

The wife in the couple was said to be 71, and they’ve been married 48 years, which means she was 23 when they got married. But she said they were in their teens when they married.

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

You handled the mixture of venues without complication. You have a guy creating an experimental talk show, a full cast of characters with diverse interests and skills, and an assigned topic. There are so many ways it could fail, but you pulled it off. Yes, it became a forum for expressing a point of view, but it's your story, you get to do that.

One of the purest stories I have ever read.

I have no idea why I didn't read this when it came out. Or even when I was reviewing Q's canon. This is really, REALLY great stuff. I just finished chapter 3 and I'm dreading chapter 4 because I know it's the last chapter listed and I don't want this to end.

Well, here we go...

I believe I Know You Rider is the name of the Grateful Dead song you referenced, which Brother Love ensured was played at Aunt Elsa's memorial. :)

I am very happy I stumbled upon this one. Thanks!

Life, death, relationships what else is there? Loving the “500 Annies” style...

Most unusual subject, its very interesting.

What will happen

Oh second comment

She can't say bullshit but he can say ass?

Excellent dialogue. A Great Presentation of subjects that did not come up on

TV back when I was young.

Where was this stuff when I was growing up? There were emotions and feelings and things happening I had no understanding about, no one to talk to, no thought of talking to anyone, just thoughts and feelings with no understanding. Almost 80 and I'm just starting to understand a little about life? What's up with that? It makes me sad. Thanks to all the writers on LIT I have read. Some of their writing make me laugh, others cry, others get me aroused, some are great and others not so great. Thank writers you all give me a little understanding, some to little and some to late.

Neat concept, but I think Joe Rogan does it better. You have as much restrictions on the show as prime time.

Still intriguing.

Next please.

Brilliantly beautiful. Sunflower here to see Petunia is the peak!

My review/comments from 2 years ago still apply not much more to ad. Keep up the good work.

I especially liked the parts of the story where our MC is talking about his great aunt. Almost brought tears to my eyes. Our MC strikes me a guy who doesn't really have any friends or maybe just one. Keep up the good work

And the hits keep on coming. The musical references have me popping over to YouTube, things I haven't heard in years. Roller Skates? Made me crack a wide grin; not since I first heard it at about 15.

Story/content wise I really enjoy not seeing same-o same-o. People do seem to like sex quite a lot. I do. I enjoy Literotica. Porn is fun too. But unlike sex addicts, not all the damn time. A blow-by-blow (pun intentional) account is not de-regueur all the time. As you can tell, not a big fan of stroke stories.