All Comments on 'Brother Misbehaving, Ch. 1'

I'm a guy, and I do have a twin sister. Is it possible? Was it really possible when we were younger and didn't know better?

Very well done - wow! A quick peek in my lap right now is all the proof you need! I got caught as a very young boy (12) by my grandmother. Darn, she did not offer to help! (smile)

(whispers.... I would have totally let her though)

dad51.married@yahoo.com

This was so hot. Please continue on with a sequel. You can't leave us all hanging like that!

I hope so.

and if she was as bad as I was all through my teen years I KNOW we would have had sex until we got caught. Luckily my sister was six years older and was married and gone before I started screwing. We caught a break there although I did screw her best friend when I was 15. Being young and it was only my second time fucking I came almost as soon as I got it in. Boy, was her pussy hot. Live and learn. L

Please continue!!!!!!

Did you stop writing in 2012. I couldn't believe when I saw you had waited from 2006 to 2012 to write your second story. What a waste of talent.

You are a superb writer. It didn't take long to see that. The first story was more than enough to tell you have a superb talent.

To write as well as you do and only write two short stories is such a waste and something I cannot understand. If I could come with a story line and write as well as you, I would be doing that all the time. I would have a huge listing of stories on this site.

Please give some thought to this.

The old guy

We need more from you! Great story!!

YES YES PLEASE CONTINUE!!!