All Comments on 'Brother, My Brother'

the story was good but you goofed you said they went to dinner and a movie on friday night but woke up the next day and it was sunday what happened to saturday do you have a special callender re read your stories several times before submitting also it needs a second chapter to finish it

I couldn't give a rats' ass about minor mistakes. I thought your intro to this series was really good. I look forward to finding the time to read it all. Thanks for your story.

A story so beautifully written i really enjoyed it, I half hope that there might have been an egg waiting for Liams seed.

I loved this story so much as it's what my brother and I have experienced.

We are lovers and feel the same way as Liam and his sister. I wish people

would try and understand what true love can really be like.

Hopefully there will be more to come soon.

Fleur xxx

Really nice, good build up and not too long. I would have not had her shave, keep it all more ardent!

Good idea, not too long like some writers. Have her grow back and keep her pussy hair, adds a bit of raunchiness to the concept. No need to have a baby, just have fun sex and love.

This is turning into a perfect love story, can't wait to see which direction you take this amazing story and to see if indeed that elusive egg does get fertilised. 5 star perfection......

The author of the story is surely fucking his own sister/ sisters to describe the sex scene between the siblings in such a natural way I would never think of sex with my own brothers but after reading this story , I find attractions in them . I am soon going to fuck one or all of my 5 brothers.

hot

Good story

5/5

I didn't care for the dominate, teasing sister in this story. 2*