All Comments on 'Brother, Sister & Niece Make 3 Ch. 01'

You always make life interesting. Makes me want a sister I never had. Mountains are magical and bring out our primal instincts, add in a blazing fire, game on. Again a great balance of character / story development and hot sex. Certainly works for me ;)

Looking forward to the next part, Andy

Interesting premise.

But it moves along much too fast. And lacks details. And lacks believable dialog.

Couldn't make it past page 1.

Two stars.

5* Good read.

I really enjoyed your story and can't wait for the next chapter and don't worry about the trolls that won't put their name to their comments.

Great story DG - I can't wait for more! Love the nipple clamps, and getting some insight into a woman's view on sex with a sibling.

Another brilliant story glad you make it realistic and not just have them having sex at the drop of a hat

Please keep up the great stories.

I've sat down and tried to write but find myself diverging to often

Love your work

Kind wishes John

So hot and erotic. Love it.

I'm sorry you lost me.but will read more.

AWSOME!

Naughty, with some forth ‘cumming’ debauchery sprinkled in.

Good job, Thank You.

Kiss Kiss Lic Lic

Can't wait for chapter two!

Another chapter would be great. If you had described the encounter between Tommy and Elia it would have been even better.

Definitely rates a Ch. 02

chapter 2 please

OK, I voted five as this story reminded me of my little sister and finding out she'd been dreaming about doing it for years. Once the fucking started these two only wanted one thing, to be joined as one. I'm looking forward to seeing his cock in Elia in the next installment too.

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Foot tapping. Waiting for chapter 2

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!