All Comments on 'Brother-Sister Bonding and B-ball'

I enjoyed this. It was well written and a very good first story. My only suggestion is that it would have been hotter if it were a little longer, with more build-up and tension before the siblings got together. I'm looking forward to reading more by you. Keep writing!

Good, but I'm waiting for the moment he come deep inside his sister's unprotected cunt, directly in her fertile womb, with a possible impregnation.

Waitin' for a new chapter...

and it still can. I, too, liked it, but it was rather abreviated, don't you think? One of those "nice job, but" type of stories.

this should have been the second part of the story there was no background as to why they were alone and had no family or as to what thier relationship was before you also need another chapter to tell how things go from here never write just part of the story always try to write a complete story

The story was far too short if you can call it that and the ending was too a abrupt..try again.