All Comments on 'Brotherly Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Pile of shit.

Said she was in her mid thirties? Then changed a sentence later to 40's? Lol.

mcbtwsmcbtwsover 11 years ago
Call WasteManagement

To pick up this garbage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
DELETE THE TRASH

way to much like nonconsent/reluctance. if you need to write trash keep it to yourself or use the nonconsent area.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

AND I DON'T CARE EITHER!!!

FIND A HOBBY THAT YOU'RE BETTER AT . . . BUT DEFINITELY NOT WRITING!

NSSurferNSSurferover 11 years ago
What was she wearing

You changed what she was wearing from cuyoff jean shorts and tank to to Pencil skirt and blouse. Makes for a lousy story

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