All Comments on 'Brotherly Love Ch. 01'

by wannabeluver1991

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Bad title

The title said brotherly love but both names are girls TAMMY and KAT there's no boys or men with either of those names

TwilightfanTwilightfanover 4 years ago
Great!

I really loved the story. I noticed you put Ch.01, so I hope you'll write Ch.02 soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Loved it!!

Your story had my pulse racing and me dripping.... I would love to read more on this Story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I would love another chapter. It was pretty good.

thebug37thebug37almost 9 years ago
Keep It Close To Home

Family affair and sex combined for a first time means near incest. Not my kind of story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Keep going ! I love it !

woody1230woody1230over 11 years ago

a 2nd chapter would be great. you can go many directions

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
awesome

great story i really hope that there is more

colin23colin23over 11 years ago
More, please

Thank you for this first chapter. It has the potential for further exploration: so I hope you will write more chapters.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 11 years ago
Lovely

wee story. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Hope there is a follow up chapter(s).

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