All Comments on 'Brothers and Sisters'

Another great addition to the series. I cant wait until the next one. Keep up the great job!!!

Ditto, keep up the great work, really really enjoy reading this series

Cant wait for next ...

the hottest stories on here..........more please!

Great stories cant wait for the next one. Hopefully, you don't make us wait to long.

Kind of hard to keep up with all the players but Im really enjoying the story :) Jake should have gotten a nice blowjob from his sister so that he lasts a nice, long time when he fucks Kaeda a bit later! ;)

Please keep the story going, but: fix the title! I read this first instead of after ch-06!

It is way hot, but you need proof reading (find a willing editor to pre-read and get words fixed - lots of typos or auto correct errors, it makes the reader stumble. But Again I emphasize that I love the story and encourage more chapters.!

carmen must be a ugly girl , coz at club her brother get all the girls and she fail to get even a single boy , and jack he is a realy jack ass after cuming on her sisters tits how can he think of others girls

Too many typos flat-out destroyed the pace. And throwing in a Boondock Saints line at the beginning doesn't help, seeing as it had no contextual place in the story. A poor effort, stilted and ineffective throughout.

Rock paper scissors......paper beats rock rock beats scissors scissors beats paper not rock beats paper

Really hot when it needed to be, and seriously loving when it should be, especially between Carmen and Jake.

Anxiously looking forward to the next chapter.

I liked it quite a bit.

5 Stars.

Absolutely loved it. Great story, well told. You could benefit from an editor, and learning the difference between 'then' and 'than', but that didn't really detract from the story. Can't wait to read the rest.