All Comments on 'Brothers and Sisters'

of crap.the whole story was just so stupid i can't believe i read the whole thing

now in saying that you had a great idea for a story just badly written,if you don't mind, I have just a few constructive criticisms

col says your so lucky to have a sister,I only had brothers then next thing a sister rings WTF

this is what made it so so stupid, Col comes home finds them having sex joins in all good so far,Jo sucks brothers dick that's cool but that's it,

no more sex with all four included, it just makes no sense, that they all had a bit of each other,& they were all cool with it, yet nothing else happened between the brothers & sisters, just completely unbelievable

In my opinion you could/should of had all of them get together for at least a one-time orgy

Little bit different way of weaving a yarn...but well done!

Thank you all for your kind comments: To clear up Anonymous's comments: you said I wrote,

".. your so lucky to have a sister, I only had brothers .."

But what I actually wrote was, "...You're lucky to have an older sister, I had two older brothers..."

Maybe I should have mentioned the younger sister at that point, but it was a comment on Richards position not Col's. Hope that clears that up, but thank you for pointing it out. What I think and what I write sometimes don't match, sorry I got it wrong that time. I'm also sorry the story didn't live up to your expectations. I can't please everyone, but I do take on board you're comments.

To the other Anonymous and the other unlisted comment I received, together with arrowglass thank you so much it does make it feel as though I am doing something right, or at least moving along the right road.

Hunter

Just not my kind of story, I very much dislike gay sex between 2 men

I am not saying its A bad story or anything like that,, just not for me,, I will not rate it so as not to screw up your ratings by others

I have read most of your stories and have liked them alot

I expected more in the way of sex, especially when Jo came into the story but that was your call since you were the writer.

As for the sex between the two men, I see nothing wrong with what consenting adults do. I should add that since my divorce 14 years ago, I decided that Bi was the way to go and I enjoy being with men or women, separately or together. And I've done both and will continue to do so.

Keep writing and I'll keep reading...... ;-)

OK UNTIL

he wanted to suck his BIL's cock.

Thats it that's all.