by Kordellian
i'm upset with this ending. i was drawn in and a bit put off from the start wondering if five pages would end with the bros anally fucking each other and ... no 😡
While Steve did end up sucking Kord’s cock, licking his dick and pubes, and tasting his cum - it was because he was tasting Carol’s pussy on Kord, not because he wanted to return favors or make Kord feel good. As such, Steve came across as a selfish lover who never really considered Kord’s needs, and that really sucked. Also, the fact that Kord married Carol but never told her about his sex with Steve or how Steve would lick her juices off his brother’s (her now husband’s) cock and pubes is really dishonest and betraying. While the story was hot, it could have been much better if these items had been adjusted.
Kord is clearly bisexual. It would have been nice for him to explore ALL aspects of gay sex with his brother as his 'top'. Would have been nice to see frotting and rimming too. Just sayin'.
So hot. Must be a weird feeling knowing that your brother has tasted your wife. Does the brother want to taste his sister-in-law again? Could be a interesting story to have a cuck who is not allowed to taste his wife directly, only by sucking her bull later.
So sweet! in a poly relationship with 2 best friends and they really got off on calling each other brother, I can totally understand the semi-sexual need like the closeness and taking care of your bro is the point, not necessarily the sex <3 home run, I’m in love with this story