All Comments on 'Brother's Little Sister'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
BIG FAN

how do you always manage to have so much control over the proceedings!!

so many things happening yet so easy to read, great job!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Well written!

Good to see you finishing stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Good but

Good tale, but I found your attempt to use every possible word for a pussy and a cock. rather annoying

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Decent Effort

This was a little too long for my liking. Still enjoyed how you underplayed most of the less important details, and concentrated only on the brother & sister.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great!!!

All The Best

bshell47bshell47about 3 years ago
Nothing exciting

Ok

lustylionlustylionabout 3 years ago
Great incest story

I really enjoyed it though I think you could have made it shorter. But the incest spice was excellent making me hard and fantasized my 24 yrs old sis.

Aussie1951Aussie1951about 3 years ago

The storyline wasn’t too bad, I thought you might have brought the their family into the story a bit more especially when the baby was born but there again I suppose being Indian they just disowned them...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Please continue your masterpieces mallu milf ASHA and lashmi...sexting Meghna aunty also

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