All Comments on 'Brothers Love Soothes Little Sister'

Pick a POV and stick with it. Jumping between narratives is very distracting.

Always love your stories and look forward to chapter II.

OOs N XXs

Daddy Dietz

A fair story of seduction...

Better skip my stories. That's the way I write. The change in POV is clear.

Dimmu_Borgir is talking through his arse. I loved the dual narration. You get to understand the situation from the perspective of the narrator at the time. It's only distracting if you don't have the mental capacity to understand two people talking about the same situation. I love this story, and for me the best three words were ... 'to be continued.' 5 stars.

Wow! Please continue.

Hot!!! Next chapter please.

Love it so far, please keep going.

Nitpicking time: you need to recheck the grammar and spelling in a couple of locations.

The basic premise is solid, but the small errors distract from the story flow.

Why is it apparently so hard to add a "Ch. 1" to the title?

Loved the story, but . . . .

Not yet ANOTHER chapter 1 when you have so many great unfinished stories! What about continuing:

“The Doctor’s Daughter”

“The Virgin and the Preacher”

And my personal fave: “Cornflower Blue”

Don’t leave us hanging all over your bibliography!

Thank you for the exciting read. You captured the the untamed lust of Traci and Todd very nicely. Now I must take a shower. Lol

More!!!!

The story was very good and I side with those who have no problem with your switching narrators back and forth. It’s your story and I am just glad you shared it. Thank you and keep up the good work.

Very good! 5 Stars - more please!

more please

I never realized that brother/sister sex could be so hot! Very credible, loved the dialogue.

POV changes are for people too lazy to write in the third person.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Don't worry about the SNOB anon comment about POV changes. He's saying he prefers a different style of writing so you are wrong. He thinks it makes him superior to you. He just doesn't realize that it does the opposite. It reduces my opinion of him, and I'm sure that I am not alone. . What a loser.

Part 2 please! Also, I love POV changes!