All Comments on 'Brought Low'

Well,you have to finish this. You could start it on the way home.Then, while they were back in school, she starts a weight loss program, and by summer she has lost 30 pounds off every where but her tits. The first time he sees the new gorgeous body he cums in his pants, but she makes him pay for his prior behavior. Keep writing, and watch your editing. Well done.

XYZ

What was that fuckin sick

Well. I can relate to Celia. Though my brother is older and he is still just a fantasy.

Amy

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What the fuck was that don't fuckin write anything

fat heap gets "thigh"fucked by brother on a packed train !!!! first he rubbing then she wanking him then hes thigh fucking her and on top of this crap tells parents who don't believe her,

Reads like they are teens not collage aged students

As someone already said, a very nice change. Short and sweet.

So much better than the average drivel, come again!

I'd love more of this

Guk!

Would not mind a continuation on the train ride home. XT