All Comments on 'Bruises Ch. 05-06'

the story is going great .. the build up is working just good ..

you tease I thought for sure when I started to read this chapter, that Walt would finally get his wish, but noooooo, you just teased some more. you're driving me crazy.

Hell I can almost smell her hot pussy. how much more are going to torture me, you already have my cock dripping, ready to blow. ....Rich

Wonderful story, Kathi! The tension is now so thick as to be tangible. I feel like we're at that moment where having pulled the rubber band apart as far as it will go, there is a tremendous amount of erotit, incestuous energy about to be released. I can't wait! Excellent writing and development of characters! Bravo!