All Comments on 'Bruises Ch. 18'

The wait is over , good story well writen but as peggy mom said, where do they go from here , well i just hope we dont have to wait as long for that question to be answered ,please hurry it along thanks for the story .

Very good

A very special chapter of your story. The "ahem" climax was sweet and gentle as Walt and Peggy-Mom's first time was. It was beautifully written and very romantic and I think a brave direction to go - by that I mean that you toned down the heat while turning up the romance - demonstrating their love for each other as a real and tangible thing, rather than just a hot, violent explosion of sex! Well done!