All Comments on 'Bruises on Bruises'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Oh, well done. I generally abhor stories that become just a tick box list of what the dom did to the sub. You've turned that on its ear by giving us an emotion filled accounting of their weekend. What makes it work is using the sub's pov to let us feel what happened. Keeping the focus narrowed towards impact play also increased the intensity.

AR

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