All Comments on 'Brush Strokes'

BEAUTIFUL absolutely beautiful

Hope there's more like that! Thanks for sharing.

Loved how Nicole was going over Zoe's body parts with her paintbrush as though she was actually touching her. Hope to see this continue with Nicole getting her turn.

To read the description of the beauty of a woman through an artist's eyes is such a wonderful experience :D

Thank you for your amazing story!

Bree <3

Very good read, I hope to see more in the future.

I found myself oddly thinking of Dorian Grey and the relationship of subject to painting. This was, however, a much more satisfying effort. If I could sum it in one word, "Sigh!"

Lovely, beautiful and well written! Thank you!

Such attention to detail! I can imagine if you wrote this for someone, they would be floored and greatly satisfied in so many ways.

Really hope to see more from Nicole and Zoey :)

So fucking hot. Ended in such passion in my favorite position ;)

detail of the beginning of your story could be a little too much where you may lose your audience

Loved the detail at the beginning the story could have just been about painting her and no sex and it would still be pretty darn good

Thank you so much to everyone who commented. Brush Strokes is the first time I've felt inspired to write something in such a long time. It felt so good to finish it and share it with you all and to read what you think. Your feedback is truly heartwarming and appreciated. Nicole and Zoey send their love! Thanks again!

Well, Saph, you can write, no doubt about that, and this is not a bad little tale. My one criticism is that the leap into sex was rather hurried. The story would have been much improved if you had taken a bit more time to work up to the sex scene, say with a little old-fashioned courting. Stories with the slow burn, with some drama and tension, are usually a more enjoyable read. That said, this is the first of your stories I've read---I'll be looking at your others with interest.