by corylake
Good story. Well written and not too long. Keep writing! True encounters are always the best!
Great first story. And Equus7 is so right, true, personal stories are absolutely the best. :)
Thank you tfor the compliments! I'm working on the follow up. I also have some side-background stories for in-between.
After reading it once posted, I saw a number of issues with my own writing: repeating certain words or terms, inconsistent ideas (but still true!), lack of description or background of myself, and even the disparity between saying it's fictional and then saying the activities are true! I don't like my title either - blech.
And yes, the activities and the reactions are true and so are the number of characters. Embellishments are kept very low. Places, names, and some body descriptions are fictional.