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erectus123erectus123about 6 years agoAuthor
IF YOU ENJOYED THIS STORY PLEASE FAVOR IT

A story based on reality is held distant from the world of fiction where the author can manipulate events to create a pleasing result. What was of greater import? The attainment of intercourse or the loss of a friendship, a loss that tragically could never be restored.

Your comments would be appreciated. Best wishes to all.--- Erectus

HecatesChildHecatesChildabout 6 years ago
Wow

Not what I was expecting but I still really liked it. Very well written..

erectus123erectus123about 6 years agoAuthor
there's an obvious typo towards the end of story

"years" should be "tears"

Thanks for your kind comments!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
A tragic story.

Deeply ironic. Losing a friend that you love over random sex with the woman he happened to love. This felt more like part of a fiction novel than erotica. and that is not a bad thing :) keep writing.

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