All Comments on 'Bump in the Night'

That was certainly a powerful story. I wasn't sure if I was reading from the First Time, Erotic Couplings, or Incest category. Well written and very erotic. Normally I would ask for a continuation, but the change in the Mom is evidence enough that story is complete. But that is your choice. Well done.

One of, if not your best story to date! I certainly hope there is a part 2 or more...

This story had just the right pace, and had you wanting just a little more each page.

Nice job!

A rare four, it was well deserved.

that's one of the hottest stories ive ever read,im soooo hard right now!!!!!! great job!!!! more!!

I must say....I read a lot of stories on here, but never - and I mean never - have I read one with such raw passion and exquisite emotion. Utterly magnificent from start to finish. My only complaint is I can't give it more than 5 stars. This one is a fucking work of art.....thank you kindly for the efforts!

Very possibly your best submission yet

Another excelent story! You are a master story teller.

Very fucking hot! I hope that there's a followup chapter to see what takes place the following day. Five stars and a favorite point!

Well done, loved the pacing and of course the story line. I love when women become lost to their desire. You knocked this one out of the park!

Omg what a hot story. I love how the sex was slow-played throughout leading up to a thrilling crescendo. I did notice a few typos but nothing that would quell this burning inferno of heat. Well done!

I wanted to give you five stars but I was not allowed

Give five,

But just this once...

I read about five stories a day for the past year or so. This is the only time I've had an orgasm while reading one. (No hands , no lotion just your story) Five stars!

I’ve read several stories like this but your story is one of the best I’ve ever read in a long time! Please continue the story. We need to know what happens to Darrin and his mother.

You hit this one out of the park. I love how moms lust and her sons slow seduction has mommy consumed by lust and slowly slips from voyer to giving her son handjobs to oral slut for her son. I love that mom slips from her marital bed and surrenders her body to her son. As the son drills his mothers pussy dad sleeps just down the hall. I love that the son encourages his mother to cum on him then announces “take my seed”. I hope this is a nightly occurrence in this house with the son having mommy dress up in her sexiest lingerie and pounding mommy till he sends her backdown the hall a disheveled mess and her pussy dripping in his seed. Perhaps after mommy is a few months pregnant dad can get awakened by a bump in the night and witness his wife’s new addiction

Pretty please 🙏😉

Please write part two soon.

PLEASE, continue. I loved this. So did my wife. You must add to this. Please!

Love the slow build, the tension was wonderful. And giving his mom a huge, dripping cream pie was killer. Now, did he knock her up??

Carl's family hates Flo, so it was best he went alone. This gave Darrin and his mom the freedom to really fuck. They would also be able to vocally express their pleasure with no fear of being heard, no matter how loud they are.

I hated her rationalizing her infidelity her the need to shrink her husband in comparison to her son simply put she saw what she wanted and took it

Very yummy indeed! I hope this continues! Thank you!

Holy fucking raging hardon! I love Darin's slut mom's progression from reluctant to full on "son's slut" Mmmmmmm.

This is a ducking good story, with its slow fire building until it takes us violently. There's no turning back even if Carl discovers them; we already know he is powerless.

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You are a fucking idiot. If you don't like the way someone tells their story then, stop reading and bitching and move on instead of telling them how you like things.

I prefer a little more romance in my stories, but sometimes the heat of the moment just requires raw animal fucking.

Thanks for sharing.

I am a hopeless romantic at heart. This, this was pure animalistic lust. I applaud you. 5 stars is not enough!

I felt the most astonishing thing; the gusset of my night gown was suddenly soaked as fluids leaked out of me. Jesus, I couldn't be getting turned on? I glanced up at the television, and felt a new rush of fluids as I realized the couple on the screen had changed positions.

Hmm, woman or automobile? These leaking fluids could spell danger for an auto, especially if it’s oil or coolant. Then again, it could merely be windshield washer fluid or condensation. : )

I’m joking of course. For some reason, when I read “fluids leaked out of me” it just struck me as funny and before I knew it I couldn’t stop laughing. Sorry about that. Anyway, I really liked the story. Thankfully, only HIS Mom and her wanton lust came to mind as I read.

I wanted sex so badly I was trying to get his motor running.

"Babe, not tonight" he grunted softly.

"Baby...I need..." I moaned softly.

"Sweetie, I pooped" Carl sighed back.

Well, now we REALLY know why Mom is her son’s cum bin.

But I really expected Carl to be sucking Darrin's cock one of those times she went downstairs.

Well done! 5 Stars.

the whole tone of the seduction changed from possible romance

to dominance with one word

slut

@rightbank it's almost like the story wasn't written specifically for you.

Very hot, and I like that the young man liked his mother's pussy hair.

Well told, simple story. It does need to end with Carl beating them both to death.

I love the build up of it! I like to see the progression in a story and not just "Oh look! A cock, let me sit on that!"

I love the way you told the story. It could easily have been any woman, including me. Whose husband isn't into sex as much as the wife. I can understand a woman wanting a man to just take her and claim every part of her as his including her womb.

A part 2 would be much appreciated where she and her son end up together and she gives him the ultimate gift.

The fruit of her womb.

A wonderful story, very close to one of my own reoccurring fantasies. I saw myself in her thoughts and slutty responses. I have images of pleasing a hard young man as well as him pleasing me. I read the story twice and it had me incredibly wet. I'm going to keep it to use whenever I need to please myself.

This is a perfect story. If more men would want there women this way, than we would have a more peaceful world. As a man I have desired only a few women this way, I also need to do better. Fantastic story.

I'm drenched. I know the sexual frustration and tension of not being satisfied for a long period of time, of the craving and intense desire for a man who wants me and will satisfy me like this. My 29 year old son seemed to know and understand this. I hadn't had a man in 10 years. My son had taken me out to dinner and after returning home I was undressing in my bedroom as he passed by. I had taken off my bra, and my panties were halfway down my legs. I was bent over with my back to the door. Suddenly, I was shocked by his hand touching me between my legs from behind. I jumped and turned around and he took hold of me and hugged me. He was hard. He said, "Mom, I need you and I want to help you." I let him touch me. He ran his fingers through the hair and found my pussy lips, and began massaging them, as he sucked my nipples. He fingered me. I was trembling all over and scared. The next thing I knew we were in the midst of such passion. I opened to him and let him enter me. It was so sweet. All he could say was , "Oh mom! Your pussy! I wanted you for years!" We spent the night satisfying one another. And, we have continued to do so.

You have a rare and unique gift for writing! You know. how tell a story like the story itself is sex. The slow build up, the reacting to stimulus, and pressing on, ever so slightly quicker as need increases.

I will absolutely watch for your works!

Hot story. Lovely style & great structure. Holds well together as a sustained piece of erotica.

Great, well written story ! I showed it to my 20 year old son just before he fucked me senseless...5 Stars!

Great story and plot line...

Fucking your own mother isn't like fucking some women you met at a bar. It's your mother. To be in bed with a beautiful woman is one thing but when that beautiful woman is your mother is another thing. If I'm making love to a beautiful, I put all my experience, my desire, my lust into pleasing her. I would wordship her sweet pussy and look into her eyes I came hard in her. But once again, when it is your own beautiful mother, it takes on another form of elevated lust.

If I was down between my mother's widespread thighs licking on her pussy, I would be in a place most men never dreamed of or thought of being. She is not some bitch you picked up at a party. My main focus would be to pleasure her as she never been pleasured. My main focus would be to make this woman my woman. To claim her as my woman. And as fucked her slow and easy I would whisper to her: "I love you more than anything or anyone. I want to fuck my baby in you Maria (when a man is fucking his woman, he doesn't call her mom, even if she is his mom, he calls her by her given name. They are no longer mother and son but man and woman).

The most precious gift a man can give a woman his child. I would never call my mother, my lover, a slut. I might whisper something like: "Give me beautiful sons and daughter my queen". Never slut.

It might be a cultural thing since I'm a Latino male.

B.

Great story... will be checking out your other stories

This is one of the hottest fucking stories I've ever read. It has me so turned on that i was soaked and even squirted a few times.

Passionate rutting I must say. Son should be more grateful though rather than degrading her but perhaps just 'cuz of the passion of the moment. Couldn't help but feel sadness for Carl but maybe it was his iwn fault....It didn't have to degrade him either as God only gave him 5 inches & that isn't Carl's fault for not being as well endowed.

4 Stars though...

LOVED IT A BIG 5 got my cock hard lots yes love mam son sex stories, what I do love is sexy stepdaughter big breasted low cut tight blouse no bra on her nipples showing clearly through her blouse short skirts showing lots of lovely long legs thighs she'd smile knowing I was looking at her she's 30 I'm 55 her mother my wife out at bingo a big hard bulge in my trousers I knew my stepdaughter looked at it I knew her mother wouldn't be home for a couple of hours my stepdaughters eyes widened watching my fingers slowly unzipping my trousers her eyes watching my hand going in my trousers taking hold of my rock hard cock bringing my cock out her eyes wide open she gasped loudly fuck fucking hell daddy, you like, you you're cocks so big so hard, your mam gets it every night, I know she does I hear you with her wishing it was me dad, it will be your bed now, yes daddy, during the nights her mother got my cock during the day my sexy stepdaughter got it more than once.

JT

As much as I like the taboo sexual relationship of a mother and son, and I really like the forwardness of his groping her, at times it was too much like locker room chatter between a bunch of high school jocks. So not quite a 5 for me.

Awesome work nice wording nice, build up nice, degrading words. Love the DS scenario!

Energy was perfect... Great contrast in the two bedrooms