All Comments on 'Buried at the Beach'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good but annoyed

Hi, it was good but the comment about not getting sun burnt because of her brown skin was very inaccurate. Sunscreen also protects from skin cancer, and believing that darker skinned individuals are unaffected by the sun is an insanely inaccurate misconception. We may not get sun burnt as easily, but it can happen and we wear sunscreen just as much as lighter skinned people. It’s protects us from skin cancer just as much as it protects them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
What's next?

Sounds like she might have a permanent cock sleeve. Interested to see what a sequel might look like.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Amazing story

Loved it keep it up!!! moar

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great story

Need a next chapter for this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great story

I can see a few more chapters to this story. Obviously you are going to have to give Camila a reason not to turn her in. She needs to dig her up and fuck her hard and beg for it. That would be another chapter. Then 2 or 3 more chapters by having Angela help Camila get revenge on her friends for leaving her there

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

So.. I hope everyone reading this understands that in fact you CANNOT breathe while a dick is in your throat. Please don’t read this and then suffocate your partner as they struggle to breathe. Accidental death is not sexy.

Good story, if it weren't for that part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Keep the story going Camila has 3 friends she needs to get revenge on.

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomealmost 3 years ago

Anonymous: "Please don’t read this and then suffocate your partner as they struggle to breathe. Accidental death is not sexy."

Have to agree. Having a 13" penis is a big responsibility.

Please behave responsibly... like I do... with my `13" penis.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Love this. You gotta make a second chapter of her fucking her new toy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wonderful story. I want to know what else happens in this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story but needs more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I come back to this story multiple times, hoping for additional chapters but not seeing any. Too bad for that.

firebird68firebird68over 1 year agoAuthor

I do have other ideas with this character but it probably won't be exactly the same themes as this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Notes said you had an idea for other stories with these characters but have not seen anything new for a long time. Sounds good, can't wait.

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