by partwolf
I love where this story is going so far. Keep up the good work.
Your stories are always a good read and I've enjoyed most of them several times. I'm looking forward to the next installment of this one, but not the end.
Another exciting battle scene, and now the Feds are involved. Looking forward to the next installment!
dayumn girl, just damn. When it rains, it pours....
Great chapter!
Sc8
I have no idea how many novels and stories I have read in my lifetime, but I can confidently say that very few of them ever reached the level of action and the gripping tension that have already surfaced in only, what, your third installment of Buried Treasure. Truly spectacular story telling.
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PN
I was determined with this instalment I was going to take my time and try to make it last until the next chapters were up. I just couldn’t do it!
This story isn't as exciting as the others. U made the Brotherhood seemed un creative, shortsighted and unable to stand on their own. Thus this series has no appeal to me. Giving u a 4/5 stars is too generous already. If I read on, will probably give u a 1 star. Greatly disappointed as I feel it a waste of my time to read further.
This far, ove the way your story is developing... Keeping me on my toes.. 5 stars all the way... Keep up the fantastic work!
What a cluster f***. Don't fancy being Rori and Chase sorting this one out and we know that with the cartel spies they'll find out who and where they are.