All Comments on 'Burning Bridges'

by sereneone4u

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El FoloEl Foloover 12 years ago
How?

How does this have zero comments? That's so gay.

Well, anywho, I rather liked this. I'm not someone who usually enjoys the consensual stuff, but I could feel the chemistry all the way from Shitsville where I live. And that's pretty impressive. Of course, that could have to do with the girl in this story being a good girl who does what she's told. ;)

So yeah. I rather loved this.

1sickbastard1sickbastardover 12 years ago
Hot!

The work needed some polish, but it is a good description of a very erotic encounter.

Keep Writing!

OleguyOleguyover 11 years ago
A rare outlook

So nice to get the feminine perspective.

I swore I wouldn't remark on others stories, coz they are Stories, but I was fascinated that they were fortunate to enjoy a deserted bridge.

Lucky beggers.

visioneervisioneerover 10 years ago

An immensely enjoyable vignette of passion. Great job setting the atmosphere, contrasting the cool air with the sexual heat.

Theakston58Theakston58over 7 years ago
Very hot

Loved the detailed discription of the woman and the scene. I'd be willing to bet you lived this. Well done!

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