All Comments on 'Burning Sky'

by LL_Timber

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenalmost 11 years ago
Hmm

Well written and great sex.

Leaves itself almost begging for at least a part 2, imo. Hate is such a bitter emotion, how about some love.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
so much untapped potential

Sounds like you got some kind of a post apocalyptic setting. If you do do a part two (say that 7 times drunk ;) it would be kinda nice to see how it all happened through the eyes of Sky.

How was she mutated. How did she managed to survive with limited food source. Will she keep killing every human she comes across till she runs out and dies, or does she help the survivors rebuild civilization so she can feed for a few more centuries.

Sorry if I come across as a back seat driver, but food for thought.

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