All Comments on 'Business Escape'

by morganjeffreydavis

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Outstanding!

Enjoyed the interesting story as well as your writing style and use of language to effectively describe emotions and sensations. Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Very well done story!

Kind of an unusual seduction! Not sure either knew where this was going! So many new possibilities could come of this Hot chance meeting! Morgan was adorable! Seems he may have opened some new doors for a bit older successful man!

Looking forward to reading more!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Amazing! Loved it!

What a good story!! So hot!! I love the spontaneos stories that happen out of nowhere, these hoy sudden encounters not planned! Keep on writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Beautifully crafted!

I agree with the earlier comment. You have a unique and beautifully crafted writing style that allows the reader to visualize such a beautiful, loving and sexy scene. I look forward to mare chapters! Don't make us wait too long!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Really Hot and believable.

Great story with hot sex, even if only one climaxed. Hope you have them meet again.cp

morganjeffreydavismorganjeffreydavisalmost 4 years agoAuthor
thank you

thanks for everyone's comments and feedback - this pandemic lining has allowed for time to write - and hopefully read.

more chapters to come soon - thanks again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Pls part 2 pleaseeee

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great story

Thanks for a well written erotic story. You conveyed perfectly what was going on in your head as well as what was happening physically between you. It seems that a whole new unexplored feeling was awoken in you. Would love to heard what happened the next day as well as any other similar encounters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Very hot, well written story!

I'm looking forward to more in this series! It seems like you are setting the stage for all kinds of hot interactions between Morgan, Camella and Janet.

type11966type11966almost 4 years ago

Beautiful story so far. Definitely got my attention, married guy here who spends much time on the road. Haven’t yet had my bisexual experience yet.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Loved this story, bi curious myself and this story just confirms how much I want to hook up with another guy! Keep up with the great stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
damn!

wrong title for this story, but wow did this turn me on! I need to find myself a straight man to torture like this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Hot Start!

This was a great story. Loved your descriptions of what he was thinking as Morgan did his thing. I see there are already many chapters and I look forward to reading them. Good writing! cp

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
this story is my exact fantasy for years

maybe not ideal with someone i worked with - but definitely a fantasy to passively allow a man massage and explore my body

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
poor

"...her and I's chemistry...."? Unbelievable.

morganjeffreydavismorganjeffreydavisabout 3 years agoAuthor

Sorry - yes I realize it's not the perfect Male Gay story - but as you'll learn throughout the series, it eventually narrows into a Gay Male experience and relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Straight married men are like this they do not become gay sex crazy. I have found the first time leads to more sex and they become more comfortable and turned on over time. They want the compassion and sexual pleasure and over time they really appreciate and want more and more sex.

tim23832tim23832almost 2 years ago

<< Anonymous; over 1 year ago

poor

"...her and I's chemistry...."? Unbelievable. >>

Boo! It's still a 99.5% A+ effort, and I look forward to the next chapters. I saw this flaw, but I got over it because the rest was so good. You write well! 5/5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Dood start, keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

My track coach gave me a very relaxing naked massage after a long workout. It ended with me face down and his cock gliding up along my butt until he went a lot further by forcing his cock into me. I avoided him as much as I could but several weeks later I asked him to do it again.

WaxmeWaxme10 months ago

Great story! Easy to fantasize it as if I were there!

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