All Comments on 'Business of Corporate Whores Ch. 01'

well....great build up in the office environment but same old same old ending. girl..being forced by guy suddenly become a wanton bitch with wet panties.....yawn. if i ever read a realistic story in lit that is simply rough, nasty and not with a happy ending (in more ways than one) i think i'll shit in my pants.

i believe i'll stop reading these stories...i don't wanna be bored to death anymore...and i hate predictable endings. lets get some originally people!!!

if she was smart when she went down on him hit her jaw real hard and bite that sucker off ... that would have been a good start... when he recovered he might not be as cocky lol... no pun intended

agreeing with the other commenter... but i also hope that she's got a little more ahead of her before she manages to =D

good start hope their is revenge and she takes them down