All Comments on 'Buster's'

I think this is the worst story I have ever read on this site.

Too short. But still 5 stars

Unfinished

Hi!

Thanks for the feedback, all. I appreciate it.

Only feedback I have to the feedback thus far: please be more forthcoming with your criticism. I appreciate commentary being constructive, polite, etc. but I don’t necessarily expect it beyond community guidelines. If you feel uncomfortable posting a public comment, critical or not, just drop me a message. Ultimately, I want to understand why you didn’t like X aspect and/or the story overall. Theoretically, I might write something you do like someday!

-Carli, aka Charles Wallace

Good start, characters need some volume to them. The transformation needs to be a bit slower. Bu all the same 5 for a good shorty